So I’m surfing Creation
Carving waves and slashing pipelines
Of the Divine
Internalizing the sublime and
Seeking something
- I’m not sure what
Exactly -
But I find shades of it in people
And personalities beyond
Nationality
It’s a similarity of Soul
A singular sensation
A simpatico Spirit in tune to
Slightly otherworldly songs
Living the quality of existence that brings
Elevated Souls into close association
Each also seeking something
- Not sure of what
Exactly -
But Synchronicity silences
Sense and sensitivity
Synchronicity demands sensation and
Soothingly smooth transitions
In companionship
Perhaps best expressed as the Test
Of Truth sought in incongruity
Of lives lived in perpetuity
Loving someone
- Not being sure of who
Exactly -
But knowing that they’ve been
Seeking you too across Life
And Time’s eternal
View
Camaraderie opens Hearts and
Souls to passion
Reveals the Spiritual in material
Form torn directly from the womb of
Creation Herself weaving spells of
An exotic nature demanding
The Love of someone
- Nobody is sure of who
Exactly -
But we’ve found each other
Here in the depths of Hearts
Where Love has been
From the start
So to finally see through the Illusion
This contusion upon consciousness
A creation of febrile mind-states
Related to the inability to create
Stability
A lack of humility and the
Continuous desire for
Something new
Someone truly true
- Who can really be sure of who
Exactly -
But here we find ourselves yet again
Tending to Antimatter Realities
Victims of Causality engaging in
Seemingly random and unadulterated
Sin
Dear Mark ... this is so very soul and heartfelt! Inspired! Thank you for these loving uniting words:
'...I find shades of it in people
And personalities beyond
Nationality'
and the reality of these:
'...So to finally see through the Illusion
This contusion upon consciousness
A creation of febrile mind-states
Related to the inability to create
Stability
A lack of humility and the
Continuous desire for
Something new
Someone truly true...'
Defines our search so well!
Love & Friendship to you!
Suzie xox :-)
The words dance in my mind,flowing circular phrasings take you up and away. I have never had my spirit dance to words with no instruments... amazing.bye now, I've got to read this again.
I so feel ya!
Your simpatico soul sister
Brightest blessings~Shell
PS I can't wait to read more of your work!
Reviewed by M. B. (Reader)
Reviewed on July 10, 2005
Oh my, Mark, what an intense, profound, dynamic piece! There are so many fantastic lines here that to point them out, I might as well copy/paste the entire piece. You've out done yourself, Dear Mark, with this one.
Camaraderie opens Hearts and
Souls to passion
Reveals the Spiritual in material
Form torn directly from the womb of
Creation Herself weaving spells of
An exotic nature demanding
The Love of someone
- Nobody is sure of who
Exactly -
But we’ve found each other
Here in the depths of Hearts
Where Love has been
From the start
Well, I suppose in the end, I had to point out an especially beautiful stanza...
This whole piece must have taken exactly a body of blood to write.
Dear Mark,
I'm glad I took the time to enter your den and read your work. You're an intelligent poet with a great philosophy and it appears you've found a great love. Thanks for sharing.
Chanti
A beautiful declaration of our (hopefully) collective spiritual purpose for living a human existence, that we might in fact evolve beyond the illusory to connect with the essentially divine within us all. The sensitivity of these lines hover and radiate like an astral being staring in wonder at the explosive origin of its own, and the universe's, creation. A tremendously satisfying reading experience.
Aberjhani
'...I find shades of it in people
And personalities beyond
Nationality'
and the reality of these:
'...So to finally see through the Illusion
This contusion upon consciousness
A creation of febrile mind-states
Related to the inability to create
Stability
A lack of humility and the
Continuous desire for
Something new
Someone truly true...'
Defines our search so well!
Love & Friendship to you!
Suzie xox :-)
I so feel ya!
Your simpatico soul sister
Brightest blessings~Shell
PS I can't wait to read more of your work!
Camaraderie opens Hearts and
Souls to passion
Reveals the Spiritual in material
Form torn directly from the womb of
Creation Herself weaving spells of
An exotic nature demanding
The Love of someone
- Nobody is sure of who
Exactly -
But we’ve found each other
Here in the depths of Hearts
Where Love has been
From the start
Well, I suppose in the end, I had to point out an especially beautiful stanza...
This whole piece must have taken exactly a body of blood to write.
~Mari
I'm glad I took the time to enter your den and read your work. You're an intelligent poet with a great philosophy and it appears you've found a great love. Thanks for sharing.
Chanti
~Linda
Reindeer
God bless,
Sandie.
Aberjhani
"Exactly" speaks for itself.
Healthy Blissful Day, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
"It’s a similarity of Soul
A singular sensation
A simpatico Spirit in tune to
Slightly otherworldly songs"
Good job!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in burleson, karen lynn. :D