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Questions
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Does a rose
know her petal's
once they lay at her side?
Their tender, soft, beauty
she's given with pride...

Can two passionate lovers
love after the ride?
their total surrender
and obsession's tears dried...

Can a woman
love a man
even after she's cried,
tears of passion,
rejection, deception, and pride?

Can my broken heart be mended
though it seems so far gone?

Can my sins be forgiven
through multiplied wrong?

Will a man remember
once we give him our all...
Two passionate lovers
obeying the call...

Does a rose
know her petal's
once they lay at her side?
Does she realize their value,
as though something has died?


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Certain things can only happen once.

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 Reviews of "Questions"
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on July 22, 2002
im overcome with awe.. that question has always been there.. what ABOUT those fallen petals.. another fabulous write! you've GOT it! katy.

Reviewed by Kala Starkey (Reader)
Reviewed on June 24, 2002
Loss of words, that was awesome.

Reviewed by Andrew Rafalski
Reviewed on June 17, 2002
thought-provoking

Reviewed by Andrew Rafalski
Reviewed on June 14, 2002
Can an heart mend? This is a way to mend it, but you have to find it by yourself. No human can help you.

Reviewed by Larry Skahill
Reviewed on June 14, 2002
I only put "10" because there is no "11" - this is a special one....I want to know the answer to the question you pose

Reviewed by Energy Shifter (Reader)
Reviewed on June 13, 2002
A wonderful work Lori

Reviewed by Charles Mann (Reader)
Reviewed on June 13, 2002
An amazing piece of writing my dear friend,it is so good to be back and reading all the wonderful words that I have been missing,,Charlie

Reviewed by Samantha Kennedy (Reader)
Reviewed on June 12, 2002
Bravo!! great write

Reviewed by Theresa Koch
Reviewed on June 12, 2002
I think this to be one of your very best!10/10 and more!

Reviewed by Tracey Hardie
Reviewed on June 12, 2002
I have to agree with Amor... wonderful write!

Reviewed by John Turi (Reader)
Reviewed on June 12, 2002
Nice...

Reviewed by C. Gourlay (Reader)
Reviewed on June 12, 2002
deep contemplation on the greater nature of things, i have no answers, only more questions, but thank you for expressing yourself with such eloquence

Reviewed by Alain Gracio
Reviewed on June 11, 2002
Beautiful writing indeed!
Cheers
Allain

Reviewed by m w
Reviewed on June 11, 2002
Can a passionate heart ever turn its back on love? Someone stepped on a very delicate flower. I hope she does not wilt from the experience.

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
Reviewed on June 11, 2002
{{ Lori }} I dont think I could say it better than Alexander.... Just like the rose,the woman has her dormant period.. a time to breath and renew.. then the light shines on her again and she is even more beautiful than before...
Love and Light
dreamweaver

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
Reviewed on June 11, 2002
Beautiful...

Light and love, Jo

Reviewed on June 11, 2002
Very thoughtful and beautiful piece. Thanks.

Reviewed by Dena Moore
Reviewed on June 11, 2002
Very beautiful, and heart-felt...

Reviewed by Dena Moore
Reviewed on June 11, 2002
Beautiful write Lori
Thanks so much for all your kind reviews of my work... I appreciate it!
Daniela

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on June 11, 2002
Very impressive write! Loved this.

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on June 11, 2002
Wow Lori, I felt such emotion from this. I dont know, maybe she does know, and the falling of her petals are her tears...for being once loved and her beauty and grace now forgotten. <sigh>

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on June 11, 2002
Wow! Lori this is powerfully amazing, I love it.

Reviewed on June 11, 2002
You have raised some good questions. Well-done, Lori!

Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 11, 2002
Very bittersweet and lovely... I agree some things only happen once...exceptional Lori

Reviewed by Edmund Canto
Reviewed on June 11, 2002
Another excellent one. Yes, a man will still remember you always, once you give it your all. Aloha, Mundo

Reviewed by Jo Janoski
Reviewed on June 11, 2002
Beautiful!

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on June 11, 2002
Can a woman love a man even after she's cried ??...the answer is definately... 'yes',...my dear love and I were apart for many years after he left me me for her...I waited ,and cried,and finally, he came back ...and he stayed ...and is still here(in my life)...after the tears 'love returns'...but only if it is 'true love'.
I love your poem .it is deep and beautiful.

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)
Reviewed on June 11, 2002
Good questions, Lori. I think of life as a series of deaths or transformations. Just like a rose sheds its petals, we peel off that which is false in our lives, and find our true selves. Beautiful poem.

Reviewed by D. Enise
Reviewed on June 11, 2002
Without question!! A "Very" powerful write!
essence of innocence, our own vulnerabilities..
Beautiful pedals!
Outstanding!
~Jen

Reviewed by Chris Stevens (Reader)
Reviewed on June 11, 2002
very beautiful words.... and very powerful questions..... I hope and believe that yes, yes it must... how could anyone forget something so wonderful.. so beautiful .. something that you give so much of yourself!!!

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on June 11, 2002
Beautiful...life continues on...such as the tender petals of a rose even after they wilt and die...after they fall off and eventually return to the earth...so does the mother plant in time. We begin to die the very moment we are born. but it is in the interim that we live, laugh, love and cry to the utmost. Beautiful write.
Amor

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on June 11, 2002
Beautiful, poignant write...


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