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I'm Fine
by Lori L Moore → (All Poetry by Lori L Moore)
  
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I would like for you to like me
your approval would go down fine
but when push turns to shove
in this fast paced world
the only approval I need is mine.

I would love for you to love me
you know I’ve invested some time
but when I turn out the lights
and relive my day
the only love that I need is mine.

I know I’m not an island
I’m not living burden free
But I have learned one thing
through all my pain
the only one I can change is me.

There was a time
when you could rule me
when your words
could pierce my soul
but now I’ve learned
that I’m ok
and now I’m in control.

I would like for you to like me
I would love to call you mine
but one thing’s for sure
my long lost love
without you I’m doing fine.


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 Reviews of "I'm Fine"
Reviewed by Tova Gabrielle
Reviewed on July 29, 2002
I really like this. it's strong.

Reviewed by Fritz Barnes
Reviewed on July 17, 2002
Hi Lori, this is a terrific poem, and it speaks such important truths.

Reviewed by Kala Starkey (Reader)
Reviewed on June 24, 2002
Wow, this is an excellent poem. You have a great way of combining your feelings with your words. WOW!

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Reviewed on June 20, 2002
Hello Lori,

Great write ... well happy to read this lovely write .. Excellent .. and wish u all the best for the love u are looking for .. Keep smiling and always look for happiness..

With Regards
Sanil

Reviewed by Josephine Bohen
Reviewed on June 20, 2002
My gosh you are fine! It took forever to fine the comments good grief girl! I loved this for the message that all you need is you. Thanks for all the comments. Your a dolly. Ron did a great job with your sketch.
Josie

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on June 20, 2002
Good for you Lori...Self-worth is so very important

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on June 20, 2002
Glad to hear you say these words! Perfect poem for self healing. Great write.

Reviewed on June 20, 2002
Excellent write and attitude. You got my vote - you matter most.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 20, 2002
You are right on track nd no looking back...;-)Great write...!

Reviewed by Cathy J. Montgomery
Reviewed on June 20, 2002
Great writing--great message...

Reviewed by Cathy J. Montgomery
Reviewed on June 20, 2002
Bury the past. Excellent poem.

Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon
Reviewed on June 20, 2002
I sure have felt this way (several times) in past relationships. Great Poem!

Reviewed by Theresa Koch
Reviewed on June 20, 2002
WELL SAID BRAVO ALSO I AGREE~*

Reviewed by Larry Skahill
Reviewed on June 20, 2002
you go girl....great thoughts expressed well

Reviewed by Dark Stranger (Reader)
Reviewed on June 20, 2002
a pleasure to see your woman
in this display of feelings
enjoyed it ms l

Reviewed by Dark Stranger (Reader)
Reviewed on June 20, 2002
Ya tell it like it is, Lori..!!!!!!Great message!!!

Light and love, Jo

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on June 20, 2002
what more can i say? i agree with the sentiment wholeheartedly and admire the way you said it.

Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)
Reviewed on June 20, 2002
Very nicely said and a great Philosophy.
we all have to heal ourselves.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on June 20, 2002
Being in control, Lori, thanks for being positive. You will be blessed......

Reviewed by (Reader)
Reviewed on June 20, 2002
Yes, you are very much in control. Take the wheel and guide your own life. Great one.

Reviewed on June 20, 2002
Very nice, Lori!!!!! Great write!!!!!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on June 20, 2002
WOW!! Lori this has got to be one of my favorites...the wording was so real and perfectly written!! You have certainly mastered not only your craft, but control over those threads left behind.
Amor

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)
Reviewed on June 20, 2002
Excellent poem, Lori. It's nice to be liked and admired by others--but you have to be yourself, even if it pisses someone off. Great message. Your writing has progressed a lot. Love it.


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