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Sweet Eyes
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Oh, this diabetes sure creates problems.


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Sweet Eyes
 
Woke up one morning and I couldn’t see.
Everything was fuzzy and blurry to me.
I’m trying to read but it’s a challenge for sure.
What happened to my eyes and is there a cure?
 
I’m trying to write and making many mistakes,
Oh, this is the pits, for heaven sakes.
Yesterday when I awoke, my eyes were just fine.
What happened since then to these eyes of mine?
 
Sugar in my eyes is what it must be,
When it is high, I can’t see.
But I’ve got to keep writing, that’s what I do,
And hope that my friends can’t see too.
 
Written by,
Bonnie May
 

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 Reviews of "Sweet Eyes"
Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on March 16, 2008
...in a different perspective...to find sugar in ones eyes...is more welcomed than anger found...which many are blind to.
beyond diabetes...eyes of sweetness...hold much within.
John

Reviewed on March 15, 2008
Oh, Bonnie! Know what you're talking about; my problem wasn't diabetes but cataracts!Had surgery, fine for 6 months, then blurring came again. Found to be membrane growths over implanted lens. Got lazer zapping that did the trick. Could see all the way to the moon!
More prayers for you, luv! No sugars or that artificial-sugar gunk, the latter is worse...

Micke

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on March 15, 2008
what a trouper you are! please take care-you are a special person

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on March 15, 2008
Your friends can't. We see love. Cheers

Reviewed by Connie Faust
Reviewed on March 15, 2008
OKAY,SINCE YOU PUT IT THAT WAY, I WON'T SEE ANY MISTAKES YOU MAKE,OK?
SOMETIMES THINKING OF A TITLE IS THE HARDEST PART--YOU HAVE A GREAT TITLE FOR THIS ONE.
REMEMBER, NO EASTER BASKET FOR YOU, UNLESS IT'S FILLED WITH VEGGIES!
TAKE GOOD CARE OF YOUR EYES, SIS! AND WE'LL PRAY THAT YOUR SUGAR WILL GO DOWN.
LOTSA LOVE, CONNIE

Reviewed by Jordan Dobrowski (Reader)
Reviewed on March 15, 2008
Oh dear now your loosing your sight, along with you mind. What are we gonna do with you Ma'Ma. I love you even though you cant see :)

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on March 15, 2008
Frustrating when we have to deal with this,,we are a complicated machine,, wishing you good health.
Love, Christine

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on March 15, 2008
No lollipops for you, but for all means keep on being sweet! ! !

Georg

Reviewed on March 15, 2008
You're in my prayers, Bonnie; please take care of yourself! 'Kay??

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

Diabetes is a cruel disease!!

Reviewed on March 15, 2008
(((Bonnie)))

Diabetes is such a nasty disease - it affects all the organs - my mother was diabetic - lost her to it 18 years ago Monday. Please take care of yourself - you are in my prayers -

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(


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