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One Old, One New
by Bonnie Lou May → (All Poetry by Bonnie Lou May)
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The only thing about this story the I truly regret is I couldn't find my video camera.


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One Old, One New
 
Two little babies locked together in walkers,  
one old, one new, with attached toys.
In the old one was a little girl,
in the new and fancy one was a little boy.
They were only about three months old
and facing one another.
Linked together in their walkers
like a sister and a brother.
 
He started grabbing all the toys between
so she couldn’t play with them.
She grabbed one at the same time as he
and a violent struggle then began.
His little ears stuck out & face got extremely red
as he pulled with all his might.
She held on with all her strength
and soon they were in a fight.
 
This tug of war went on and on,
with neither giving an inch.
He was a lot bigger than she was,
It should have been a cinch.
 
The more he pulled, the more red
his little face had got.
She looked up and saw him,
started laughing quite a lot.
The more he pulled the more she laughed
but she never let go of the toy.
This was the funniest thing I ever saw,
that little girl and boy.
 
Written by,
Bonnie May
 

 


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 Reviews of "One Old, One New"
Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on May 15, 2008
And that reafirms the believing that when a woman wants something she wouldn't let go until she have it.
Oh! poor little boy in a walker....

Georg

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on May 14, 2008
precios in their anger! such a sweet and funny write

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on May 14, 2008
pretty cute story
I am sure it was a sight to see!
Cryssa

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on May 13, 2008
...wonderful story...and seems like one reader Jordan...knows exactly what you are talking about...hmm???
great write Bonnie...
John

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on May 13, 2008
Bonnie I just love the way your mind works to create such a vivid wonder as these two, God bless.....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Jordan Dobrowski (Reader)
Reviewed on May 13, 2008
haha i love it ma'ma I sure have not changed in 18 years still fighting with boys and laughing at how mad i get them!!! I love how you wrote it though!!!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on May 13, 2008
Yes, if you lose your cool in a fight you are probably going to lose. So the bigger boy was at a loss to the little girl who thought it was all in fun. What an awesome story. It is too bad you didn't have your video. Liz

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on May 13, 2008
I could see the two struggling over the toy.Great write....M

Reviewed by Lavendar Jazz
Reviewed on May 13, 2008
A very charming story... well done.

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on May 13, 2008
They should spend a lot of time together!!! Goes WAY back these kiddie fistfights.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on May 13, 2008
That 1890 walker hasn't changed much in the last 100 years and the story is a gas. Cut gal in that pic.

Reviewed on May 13, 2008
Oh, how toys do tempt the little ones! And even as they get bigger :o)
Delightfully humorous poem, Bonnie! And see you got the "images" part working, now.
Blessings and Love ~~ Micke

Reviewed by Connie Faust
Reviewed on May 13, 2008
In the picture, she's laughing still, and the undisputed winner!
Great little poem--the eternal struggle between male and female goes on.

Thanks for a grin to get me going today!
Love,
Your Sis Connie

Reviewed on May 13, 2008
Precious!!!!!!! Well done, Bonnie.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on May 13, 2008
Full of good laughs...I can just see "his" little red face & her grinning. A good write.


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