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He Comes
by Mitzi Kay Jackson → (All Poetry by Mitzi Kay Jackson)
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He comes to me just as smooth as night
Whispering in my ear all of the things
That will open my thighs
Let my clothes fall from me
Welcoming him inside
I virgin to his tongue
Didn’t know the reason till I felt his stung
Bare through and to my soul
He comes to me and won’t let me go
Breeze runs through as he crosses my gate
Shivers down my spine for I know my fate
Hold all at distance who thinks of coming my way
Helpless in his arms I am
….and he comes to take

He comes to me just as smooth as the color black
Sliding inside me takin’ journeys and back
My naked-ness is not my shame for him it is as how I would remain
Bare to and through to my soul
He comes to me and won’t let me go
I feel the coolness of his cloak moving upward from my toes
He comes to me and I let him in
How I open and raise for him my toll taken for past sins
Slight breezes runs through as he crosses my gate
I submit myself for he is fate
Holding all who even thinks of coming this way
And helplessly I fall into his arms
My arch is stretched at full extinct
…..as he comes and gets me

He Comes to me as soft as night
Wrapping me up in his skies
And the breeze of his wings penetrating in my mind
Open I am to him
Willing for heavy to carrying my sins
Freedom comes in his winds
He comes
I open
Letting him in
Soft gushes blow pass my face
As I feel him crossing my gate
I openly submit for he is my fate
And He Comes and He Comes and He
Takes me AwAy

He Comes to me just as soft as the color black
He takes me up in his lap
and all the pain that hid in spots before
Eases from inside of me makin me open much more
He comes to me slight kisses as rain
Refilling all that was missing from humanly remains
I virgin to his tongue
After hours knowing Love
Carrying me away
Blocking all that had a notion to come my way
Breeze running past me opening his arms
I dance
And he comes to me and comes to me and comes to me
And fill me in his hands

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 Reviews of "He Comes"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on June 11, 2005
Emotively and passionately enthralling, Mitzi. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on June 10, 2005
very good, very sensual, damned good imagery and intensity...This is really good, Mitzi

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 9, 2005
Stunning work Mitzi! Awesome words full tilt! WOW!;-)

pic slew me...

Eileen

Reviewed by Huda Orfali
Reviewed on June 9, 2005
Wow, amazing
love and peace

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 9, 2005
Lust stretched to full extent.

Ron

Reviewed by Sandra Mushi
Reviewed on June 9, 2005
The imagery and the words are amazing!

Absolutely beautiful, Mitz!

God bless,

Sandie.

Reviewed on June 9, 2005
Mitzi,

I've missed you; glad to see you're back!

And this one...this sensual beauty just explodes off the page and into the senses!!! Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on June 9, 2005
great poem and pc mitzi, good as always

Reviewed on June 9, 2005
wow, both the picture and the poem are absolutely striking! excellent job, mitzi; keep it up! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on June 9, 2005
Virtually epic, Mitzi. Great build and imagery. Liked the repetition. I really enjoyed reading this. ~~Nordette

Reviewed on June 9, 2005

Eros, Erato, Euterpia and Phoebus would enjoy the scent of this
flower named, "He Comes".

Never rest Your pen, Poet!


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on June 9, 2005
Good write, Mitzi! Well-expressed.

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Mark Carroll
Reviewed on June 9, 2005
Fairly erotic.

Nice Job
M,kay

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 9, 2005
Truly a deep and intriquing poem that makes the reader dig a little deeper for the true meaning of this one.
Felix


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