Wind edges in, rushing twigs and branches enough that more leaves are forced to let go. Lying on my back, I cringe as more bodies sway and tack. Sail down, sail down to join the fallen. Many comrades brown. So many pile, what is one? Except. . . unless. . .you’re a leaf? Suddenly see wrens bombed from their nests and marched to a front. See how they fall. See how they fall. Shriek of ever-building winds once again hobbles wings and limbs. Binds them to sides and heads, sends them out in the cold. Leaves, knowing they may be too battered to hang on. Fought too hard and too long. So many fall right off that others lose their footing or get so sad and muddled, they can’t lift. Too-often-soaked, too-often-starved-and-thirsting, too-often-robbed-of-friends. Gun-crack/ratatat- deaf and phosphorous-blind, cannot recognize their own flesh. Every bone aches, and the down that is supposed to protect sweats to a mat, scabs away. What choice but to give up. Succumb to fatigue. So many are going -- know they are going -- to die. After all, other bodies got piled or lost before their season. Other bodies did not have time to drift, but were ripped to shreds in place. Not a feather to be seen. Happens as we lie. Others, weapons rained fire on – are raining on -- until they were knocked off – are knocked off – or broke. Break, leaving minds free to contemplate the cost. Work at recalling those for whom crosses raise and flags fold, but who like the leaves, some would have us ignore. This particular show is over. Better get up. Do something.
Powerful in the extreme when forced to think about these issues through the exact medium of your metaphor, Pea. Like how we don't think about the nursery rhyme's intent in the first place. A stark and resonant wake-up call that drums the reality home afresh, as it should be, by putting the facts into a different, more pastoral setting. Man truly is a beast. Thanks for this way of setting my sights afresh.... again... LOL Kate xx
Pea! This piece is an explosion of emotion pricking imagery that hurls the reader out then draws her back into a lazy river where she drifts along watching heart-wrenching war scenes played out before her along shadowy banks. Powerful allusions. Very well done.
The title is a striking contrast to the subject matter, yet it is a lullaby of sorts, isn't it? Love, love, love the strong voice here that screams get up, do something.
Brilliant POetic Mulch scribed as seasonal tribute to Veterans and nature. Limbs severed and turned to dust, buried and forgotten.
It would seem to me that as compassionate humans mandatory, to take the time to honor both the fallen Veterans and wind-blown leaves, for the protection they have given us. The parks, the cemeteries, small-town America, metropolis, and Skylar crossroads. One line does it all for me in this poem, "Suddenly see wrens bombed from their nests and marched to a front." Analogy is so apparent in this ... just say the title "When the Bough Breaks." Enough said. Thank you, my glitterati friend, Pea!
Tears are rolling down my face--O, what a powerful, powerful write you've penned in tribute to those who have paid the ultimate sacrifice--visually stunning, the comparison to storm tossed birds is brilliant. Thank you, dear friend, for remembering our veterans. As a former medic in the United States Air Force, I salute you.
A detailed study of the origins of the New Alienation. The author labels it normative or postmodern ennui and traces its rise to cultural power over the last two centuries.
Black white (well sort of pinkish) etcetera, Christian Muslim etcetera, Hetero-Homo-Metro Sexual, Physical, Mental, Ow! Includes all human rights violations I could think of.
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(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( >tears <
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Very sad and powerful write.
A fine write for a sorry subject!
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It would seem to me that as compassionate humans mandatory, to take the time to honor both the fallen Veterans and wind-blown leaves, for the protection they have given us. The parks, the cemeteries, small-town America, metropolis, and Skylar crossroads. One line does it all for me in this poem, "Suddenly see wrens bombed from their nests and marched to a front." Analogy is so apparent in this ... just say the title "When the Bough Breaks." Enough said. Thank you, my glitterati friend, Pea!
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Tears are rolling down my face--O, what a powerful, powerful write you've penned in tribute to those who have paid the ultimate sacrifice--visually stunning, the comparison to storm tossed birds is brilliant. Thank you, dear friend, for remembering our veterans. As a former medic in the United States Air Force, I salute you.
((((HUGS)))) and love, Karla.