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Jesus and the Man
by Linda M Hill → (All Poetry by Linda M Hill)
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Man

Get away Jesus,  How can You love me
I'm a sinner,  don't you know

Jesus

I love you because you are mine
I can wash your sins white as snow

Man

I'm in pain,  my heart bleeds
I don't want you bothering me

Jesus

I am here to offer healing love
I'll set your demons free

Man

I am not worthy to touch your hem
Or kneel in shame by Your cross

Jesus

It was my lifes blood that flowed
To save ALL who are lost

Man

I'm a murderer,  and a gambler
Go away,  just let me be

Jesus

My son,  I offer forgiveness
No sin is too big for me

Man

I've lost my wife,  and my child
There's nothing left to live for

Jesus

Live for Me, my son
God's love is forevermore

Man

I scream out in anquish
Satan fights to possess

Jesus

Put your faith in Me, my child
And I will do the rest

Man

How can You love the likes of me
I'm not fit to live

Jesus

You will be born again, my son
A new life I will give

Man

I cannot take this pain alone
Jesus,  please help me stand

Jesus

I've been here all along, my child
Just waiting to take your hand....

~Linda Hill~

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 Reviews of "Jesus and the Man"
Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on March 12, 2009
Beautiful and inspiring write Linda....touched my heart as I'm sure it will many...love and hugs, Bonnie

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on February 28, 2009
Linda,
Your faith shines bright in this posting. Love and Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by David Clure
Reviewed on February 27, 2009
This is a very powerful poem, Helen! I liked the illustration you used, cheered in my heart as I read the message you so beautifully showed...There will no doubt be many who read this who identify with the man here. Truthful writing so needed today...
No human is beyond Christ's saving grace!

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on February 23, 2009
What an inspiring write this is!!! Jesus saves everyone, including those who think unworthy of themselves. Jesus never gives up on anyone.

Wonderful write, Linda!!!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on February 22, 2009
Yes devine love of the father is unconditional.........I like this format here it adds to the strength of this inspiring write Linda, pax A

Reviewed by Zahra V (Reader)
Reviewed on February 18, 2009
This is an outstanding piece. It truly touched my heart. I think I may have shed a tear or two. :) Thank you so much for sharing. I definitely have moments in my life when I feel like this.

Zahra V.

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on February 18, 2009
This is a very sweet poem,lovely and beautiful.take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on February 17, 2009
Very effective!! Faith and love shine in every line !!

Reviewed by Connie Faust
Reviewed on February 17, 2009
How patiently He waits for the needy one to surrender, and receive His love. You did a beautiful job with this--a fascinating story well told, showing the unconditional love of Jesus, and all done in skillful rhyming. Connie

Reviewed on February 17, 2009
Linda~!

Welcome back dear angel - your faith and belief shine brightly in this superb piece . . . !!


Blessings,

Lance

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on February 17, 2009
This is so beautiful as we know His love is unconditional, He is a forgiving Father. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by larry linville
Reviewed on February 17, 2009
very well written. This could be used in a worship service as a litany.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on February 16, 2009
Excellent Linda. Very well done my friend. God bless.

Reviewed by Michael Jones
Reviewed on February 16, 2009
Linda your poem touches every realm of our live and places we have yet to go. But the beauty of this excellent piece is that Jesus is the answer to all our woes': And He can do anything but fail. Alleluea! For the Savior and thank God for you! May Justice, Truth, Love, and Peace never cease from this earth!!!

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on February 16, 2009
Spiritually warm and engaging...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Roger Richard (Reader)
Reviewed on February 16, 2009
Beautiful work Linda.

Reviewed on February 16, 2009
Linda,

Absolutely gorgeous, this interaction between the Son of Man and man. Even when we're at our lowest, He is there, willing to pick us up and love us, just as we are. Well done, my new favorite of yours.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on February 16, 2009
WOW!! Powerful lines you pen; Jesus does love us that much! Even when we feel we aren't deserving, He picks us up, hugs us, and loves us, no matter WHAT! He's that kind of Man! And I am so glad He is! Very well penned, Linda; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by John Coppolella
Reviewed on February 16, 2009
The last two lines ring true, how he patiently awaits the day that we stop playing Jonah and keep getting swallowed by his whale.

My true story, "A Reason for Living," tells of that exact moment when we finally concur and comply with his offer to love us unconditionally, if only we will stop running away long enough to listen.

Thanks for this powerful poem.

Starman

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on February 16, 2009
You share an eternal story, Linda. Thank you. Love and blessings to you,

Regis

Reviewed on February 16, 2009
Linda this is beautiful, he takes away our sins and for that, I am grateful. A beautiful write of faith
In Christs Love
Michelle~


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