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I Don't Want To Take This Anymore...
by Linda M Hill → (All Poetry by Linda M Hill)
  
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The wall keeps closing in
Keeping everything within
Time keeps marching on
Seems all hope is gone
I've struggled to be free
From the darkness inside me
No key to unlock this door
And I don't want to take this anymore

Dark clouds is all I see
Slowly suffocating me
Wrapped up inside myself
Knowing theres nothing left
Tears fall like gentle rain
They can't camouflage my pain
Too many to keep score
And I don't want to take this anymore

I search for a little light
There is none in sight
Sinking deeper in despair
I look but no ones there
Time slipping through my hands
No one understands
My life in pieces on the floor
And I don't want to take this anymore

© Linda Hill 2003




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 Reviews of "I Don't Want To Take This Anymore..."
Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on April 6, 2003
this was so emotionally painful and dark awesome job on this one my sweet angel

Reviewed on April 4, 2003
good! :( (((HUGS)))

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
If I were not so hard of heart I would be booing my ass off over this one.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
Linda, excellent as usual my friend. A very emotional struggle.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
Dear Linda...This is very very powerful and emotional write...take care...love n luck...BHUWAN

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on April 4, 2003
Powerful display of dark emotion.

Reviewed on April 4, 2003
Awesome write Linda..so forlorn

Reviewed by Eroica Mendoza (Reader)
Reviewed on April 3, 2003
hold on... there will be light...

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on April 3, 2003
Linda
This is an outstanding insight of a depressed person, I do hope and pray , its only a poem

William

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 3, 2003
remember, you always have the potential to to take those pieces and recreate yourself... believe you can and you will...

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on April 3, 2003
Linda dear, no you are wrong. Many love you and I love you also. If you reach out to me, I would respond. You will always have a place in my heart no matter what you think of me. I will do anything you need me to do to be of service to you. If you will let me know. Do you know a friend from an enemy? Bill


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