The night we met
is embedded in my mind
you were
everything I needed you to be
and, more
When you...
laid me down at your feet
And...
kissed me gently
your lips so soft and inviting
took me to a whole new level
than I was used too
When you...
laid down beside me
you enticed me
caressing me entirely
with your effervescence
I melted
And...
my heart fluttered
as gently as
the wings of a dove
I love...
the way you touch me
executing mutual emotions
passionately embracing
a scent of mystery
that glistens in the air
dancing in the wind
When you...
look at me
I tremble inside
realizing that I
had fallen for you hard
so hard
trying to
tell you how I feel
that what I feel for you
is real
the night we met
was like...
Midnight In Paradise
You ever listen to Rhian Benson's song, "Say How I Feel" Well this reminds me of it in the way you want to tell him how you feel and how you feel when he touches you. I think this some nice passion fruit and keep ripenning the fruits of your word art sista! Peaceout, Chicken
Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)
Reviewed on May 3, 2008
Beautifully written, Maxine! I really enjoyed your poem and welcome to the den ...
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