The night we met
is embedded in my mind
you were
everything I needed you to be
and, more
When you...
laid me down at your feet
And...
kissed me gently
your lips so soft and inviting
took me to a whole new level
than I was used too
When you...
laid down beside me
you enticed me
caressing me entirely
with your effervescence
I melted
And...
my heart fluttered
as gently as
the wings of a dove
I love...
the way you touch me
executing mutual emotions
passionately embracing
a scent of mystery
that glistens in the air
dancing in the wind
When you...
look at me
I tremble inside
realizing that I
had fallen for you hard
so hard
trying to
tell you how I feel
that what I feel for you
is real
the night we met
was like...
Midnight In Paradise
You ever listen to Rhian Benson's song, "Say How I Feel" Well this reminds me of it in the way you want to tell him how you feel and how you feel when he touches you. I think this some nice passion fruit and keep ripenning the fruits of your word art sista! Peaceout, Chicken
Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)
Reviewed on May 3, 2008
Beautifully written, Maxine! I really enjoyed your poem and welcome to the den ...
Early Works is an exhaustive compilation of the first decade of the poems and stories of Z.B.McClure. Included are family photos, rare personal photos, photos of 1st draft manuscripts of many of his early poems. Also some biography and memoir materia
My book of poetry is being redone by me, I have a beautiful cover designed and the book will have a few more than 200 poems in it. I am going to have it printed on demand here in Canada. When it is done I will let you know when it is done and if anyo
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