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Too many.(written in late 80's under my early pen name 'Sarah')
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 Too many 'if's'

too many 'when's'

too many 'sorry's' and 'Never agains'

too many promises.

too many lies,

far too many 'one more tries'.

How many were there before I knew

that ACTIONS speak louder than promises DO ?

 

 

Footnote:. Thank you Bobbie yes it was spelling error...thanks for pointing it out,I changed it.Must have been rushing too much,sorry folks.  

 


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 Reviews of "Too many.(written in late 80's under my early pen name 'Sarah')"
Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
Reviewed on July 25, 2003
Kay, this is very good, just a small correction, in the first line is it supposed to be too many? Otherwise it a great write.
Bobbi

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
Reviewed on July 25, 2003
Good write..to the point..
Jenni

Reviewed by Erica Ivory
Reviewed on July 25, 2003
I hate promises... This is a great write.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on July 25, 2003
Perfect write....BHUWAN

Reviewed on July 25, 2003
Oh Yes, I understand all to well, This was excellent,

Reindeer

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 25, 2003
Wonderful Kay! Terse and true to the point, Excellent write!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 25, 2003
to the point!!

Love
Tinka

Reviewed on July 25, 2003
You are so right!!!!!!
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on July 25, 2003
Thanks for these words of wisdom Kay.

~Joseph

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on July 25, 2003
Perfection in a few words!

Reviewed by Steve Ralph
Reviewed on July 25, 2003
perfect as always Kay
and so much said in so few words yet again.
you have such an immence talent for doing that.
your pommy pal steve.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on July 25, 2003
Sometimes promises should be silent till they manifest.
excellent Kay,

Hugs
PJ

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on July 25, 2003
I can promise you anything, but you should always insist on the cash.


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