Three smart & beautiful girls
went to roam around the world
some routes were known
some routes were strange
but they had the guts
to see the world.
Three daring girls took a bus
which stopped in midway
they took another bus
but they sit on stairs instead of seat
but that didn't hit their dream
of seeing marvelous world.
Instead of all obstacles
ups and downs
they reached their destination.
First time in their 20s
they felt like child again
had no fears and boundations
same essence of innocence
same freedom of being themselves
same power of beleiving in dreams
same realisation of laugh again.
Copyright 04.10.2010 -Yaduvanshi Neha
Dear Dear Neha,(I believe that this is your first name, although my colleagues wrote differently). I liked your poem and the subject you chose. Particularly I liked these few lines which express the youth:
"First time in their 20s
(THEY HAD NO FEARS AND BOUNDATIONS)
same freedom of being themselves
same power of beleiving in dreams
same realisation of laugh again.
Lovely, it is always important to have the power to believe
Love Emile
Blessings and best wishes
David
Regis