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Trip of 3 Girls
by YADUVANSHI NEHA → (All Poetry by YADUVANSHI NEHA)
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Three smart & beautiful girls

went to roam around the world

some routes were known

some routes were strange

but they had the guts

to see the world.

Three daring girls took a bus

which stopped in midway

they took another bus

but they sit on stairs instead of seat

but that didn't hit their dream

of seeing marvelous world.

Instead of all obstacles

ups and downs

they reached their destination.

First time in their 20s

they felt like child again

had no fears and boundations

same essence of innocence

same freedom of being themselves

same power of beleiving in dreams

same realisation of laugh again.

 

Copyright 04.10.2010 -Yaduvanshi Neha

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Trip of 3 Girls"
Reviewed by Emile Tubiana
Reviewed on November 28, 2010

Dear Dear Neha,(I believe that this is your first name, although my colleagues wrote differently). I liked your poem and the subject you chose. Particularly I liked these few lines which express the youth:
"First time in their 20s
(THEY HAD NO FEARS AND BOUNDATIONS)
same freedom of being themselves
same power of beleiving in dreams
same realisation of laugh again.

Lovely, it is always important to have the power to believe
Love Emile

Reviewed by David Maclellan
Reviewed on October 4, 2010
Good for you Yaduvanshi! It takes quite some courage to strike out with friends and take on an adventurous journey, and it sounds like it was great fun and the fulfilment of a dream.
Blessings and best wishes
David

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 4, 2010
Lovely sentiments, Yaduvanshi; your verses remind me of when my two daughters left for Europe from Canada for a summer adventure. Thanks for sharing. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on October 4, 2010
Great writing..enjoyed..Hugss

Reviewed on October 3, 2010
destinies discovered....morgan


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