Beauty is intuitive and instinctive and its recognition does somehow connect with an invisible strand in heart and soul that just "breaks" when it is touched, releasing an unsurpassable fragrance which lights us up from within. Another really gorgeous write from you, Retta, thank you. Kate xx
Completely captivating, Retta. A wonderful poetic offering shared well. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis
Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on May 19, 2005
Beautiful! Such an inspiring, gorgeous poem. Really brings peace and hope A wonderful tribute to the artists keeping this beauty and dreams alive. With You, being such an outstanding and loving Poet.
Thank You So much. A peace you brought to me.
The little boy made me smile too. Thanks (c :)
Tracey
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
you reviewed me; now it is my turn. :) feel free to check out my new story; think you may like it! :)
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on May 18, 2005
No one can say it quite the way you do. You float around on clouds that move and shift with the wind, but when it is needed you come off that cloud and sink your teeth into the meat of the subject.
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on May 18, 2005
An absolutely stunning write Reindeer!
Hope, Dream & Love,
Joseph
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on May 17, 2005
Love the way you weaved your truth through this write. Especially loved the ending. I could visualize this child enjoying the rose :-)
Yes... reality is in the heart and soul, and it does have the power of creating masterpieces, and filling the galleries of life with dream and love... that become the muses of more beautiful realities.
Absolutely beautiful, soulful work of Art from the heart, dear Retta.
Love&Light*
Alexandra*
This is so beautiful, Reindeer. The gentle flow and the beauty of your verses floated like a whisper on the wind. I am saving this to read again and again.
Take care,
Sherry
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Reality Is Enjoy What Little You Can Have Left!
Creative Aspiring Write!
TRASK
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on May 16, 2005
In the picture. The middle cloud I see a man with curly hair,left eye, nose, a smile with a bearded long chin. lol. Btw love the sleepy qualities of the poem. Well it is past midnight here...
Beautiful; i'm a great admirer of your poetry--the imagery, emotions, and pictures all fit together, although just reading your words would capture all three; nicely done.
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Thank You So much. A peace you brought to me.
The little boy made me smile too. Thanks (c :)
Tracey
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
you reviewed me; now it is my turn. :) feel free to check out my new story; think you may like it! :)
Hope, Dream & Love,
Joseph
It truly is, Reindeer, and this truly is a wonderful poem.
-Carrie
Absolutely beautiful, soulful work of Art from the heart, dear Retta.
Love&Light*
Alexandra*
This is inspirational poetry at its finest!
Take care,
Sherry
Reality Is Enjoy What Little You Can Have Left!
Creative Aspiring Write!
TRASK
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Elizabeth
excellent write
William .....Peace & Love
Love Tinka
John
Beautiful uplifting poem, a joy to read!
Love,
Alrisha
Breathtaking, exquisitely penned, beautiful write! Well done! You've written a keeper--thank you. :)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)