The first stanza is so well written there is no need for the rest . . . Still, the others give credence to the first. Like Jane, I feel your poem gives of itself all it has to give, and that is a good thing. Awesome write!
Indeed, a noble sentiment to be sure, made surprisingly accessible here in this poem. Something elusive that becomes surprisingly real. As you say, "nothing is lost, where trust is our guide. Thanks for sharing this intimate thought. John
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