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Pantoufles
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Inamimate objects can be powerfully symbolic...


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Pantoufles*
 
it’s not that you are fickle
but you flit
like a butterfly
into my home
you make my heart flutter
you fly into my soul
like a cherub
i feel your invisible wings
stirring the whole of me
 
and suddenly
you leave
 
your brief presence lingers
in your sweet scent
the lingering sound
of your angelic voice
silken touch
ivory skin
cerise lips
emerald eyes
silky hair
 
your going
leaves me light-headed
and aching inside
fleetingly lost
 
relief flows over me
when i see
on the floor
by the door
once more
you’ve left behind promises
in your pretty pink pantoufles


*French word for "slippers"
 
 

© Copyright 2010    Regis Auffray

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Pantoufles"
Reviewed by lois christensen
Reviewed on August 21, 2014
Memories, and left behind are precious, She will be comfortable in her slippers when she returns on a return visit. Best of luck to you always.

Reviewed by Kathy Anderson (Reader)
Reviewed on April 12, 2011
So sweet. This has a lovely flow of words as well.

Reviewed by Regina Pounds
Reviewed on February 25, 2011
Light-hearted and romantic...yes, adorable!

Gina

Reviewed by lili dauphin
Reviewed on January 28, 2011
C'est absolument adorable. Beautiful.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on January 19, 2011
Beautiful writing just like the man who wrote this ...stay safe and well...Hugsss

Reviewed by Regis Schilken
Reviewed on January 10, 2011
Very nice "Pantoufles" from one Regis to the other.

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on January 2, 2011
poignant read

Reviewed by The Poetess
Reviewed on December 22, 2010
Very creative. . . I too, hope she returns to you.

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on December 22, 2010
Another great offering Dear brother...Pantoufles is also Spanish for slippers except it is spelled pantuflas. Happy holidays to you and yours.

Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald
Reviewed on December 17, 2010
Ahhh how sweet this is. I loved it Regis

hug
Kat

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on December 10, 2010
Relief indeed! Of course at my house the pantoufles are puppy bait. Patrick

Reviewed on December 10, 2010
Reg,

Wonderful love poem, may your love return forever.

Mary

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
Reviewed on December 10, 2010
may she return to fill them soon, much enjoyed this nostalgic pen.

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on December 9, 2010
Adorable write, Regis!!!!! Enjoyed ...great phrasing....

Anna

Reviewed by Stephanie Webb
Reviewed on December 7, 2010
I Love this Regis. Thanks for all of your kind words. You are one of the best writers ever!

Thanks for all of your enjoyable work!
Steph

Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)
Reviewed on December 7, 2010
I always love your work, my friend. Your writing is so colorful and meaty with emotion, from the heartfelt detente through the inevitable dénoument. This piece really moved me and reminded me of my own poem "Catfish." Hope you are enjoying a joyous season and keeping warm.

-=ra=-

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on December 7, 2010
Eclatant...I think that's French for brilliant, Regis,
this of course this is. Especially the closing lines.
-gene.

Reviewed by KJ McPhee
Reviewed on December 6, 2010
Regis, I like those house slippers.

The Chinese slip into them when they get home, but back home we wandered over the house in our outdoor shoes, even big mucky boots ... we know better now!

May there always be a lady's pantoufles by your door!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on December 5, 2010
Sweet. Butterflies seem to always make life better. Beautiful. Liz

Reviewed by Micki Peluso
Reviewed on December 4, 2010
Ahh Regis, this is such a sweet poem "flittering and fluttering" like the teasing of the buterfly who never quite promises to return. Just what I needed on this cold, damp evening.

Love, Micki

Reviewed on December 2, 2010
Regis this is so sweet. I love how you used pantoufles to share with us how insignificant objects can mean so much. We would never know how significant they are unless we're told, and you said it well.


Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on December 1, 2010
ahhhh such sweet poetry, Reg! makes me feel warm all over;-)I love it!Great new pic,too(on bio page)

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
Reviewed on December 1, 2010
If she's left something behind to stay
You know what they say
She plan's on coming back your way.

Very tender and soft.

Reviewed by Margaret Mullings
Reviewed on November 30, 2010
Beautifully written Regis and heartfelt too!
I found this very interesting....what creativity1
May the Lord strengthen and bless you and your
family Regis! Thank you for sharing and having
such a caring heart!

Much Love,
Margaret

Reviewed on November 30, 2010
Her feet will come home again! Touching poem Regis.

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on November 30, 2010
SHE'S NOT FICKLE...SHE JUST 'FLITTERS'...IN AND OUT...AND YOU THOUGHT IT WAS ALL OVER. WELL, ALL I CAN SAY IS, I HOPE YOU HAVE 'ASSUMED' CORRECTLY AND INDEED SHE WILL RETURN...SOONER OR LATER, ANYWAY. KINDA SAD. THANKS FOR SHARING AND MUCH BLESSINGS, LOVE & FAITH... JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on November 29, 2010
... ach, achingly delightful, Regis: light, bright and candy-cotton sweetness. And yes, "pantoufles" does indeed say it all! Cherry blossom drifts softly on the spring breeze of the heart here. xx

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on November 29, 2010
I like the intensity of the love in this piece, Regis. Like an addict...as we often are in the beginning. The longing in this poem is tangible. Excellent writing. Love and Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on November 28, 2010
charmed, indeed!

Reviewed by karen logan
Reviewed on November 28, 2010
Regis, Very moving. I felt your hearts desire as I read. Nicely done.
Picture perfect thoughts. Love and light, Karen

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on November 28, 2010
very sweet!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 27, 2010
a lovely poem to slip into ...

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on November 27, 2010
enjoyable write Regis
Slippers look like the ones, My dear Mothers
used to wag me with, when she couldn't get to the broom
Peace be with you


William





Reviewed by Daniel Keith
Reviewed on November 27, 2010
Beautiful poem Regis. I pray the Lord will bring your one true love back to you. May God bless you every day of your life.

Daniel

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 27, 2010
Leave me in the pink.

Ron

Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
Reviewed on November 27, 2010
Surely she will return if she leaves behind her pretty pink pantoufles (I love the French word for slippers). "your going leaves me light-headed and aching inside fleetingly lost" is such a poignant stanza and is deeply felt. Always wonderful. ~Hugs and love, Elizabeth

Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe
Reviewed on November 27, 2010
So very sweet and romantic. :)

Reviewed on November 27, 2010
Adorable poem, mon ami!

(((HUGS)))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on November 27, 2010
Light as a feather..romance dances~

Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)
Reviewed on November 27, 2010
so beautiful...so very lovely..romance is in the air..best wisjes Regis.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on November 27, 2010
BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
Reviewed on November 26, 2010
Enjoyed the romance. xxx

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on November 26, 2010
Such sweet romance, Reg. I really enjoyed this read. There is a soft sigh in each stanza.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on November 26, 2010
Reegis, beautifully written and a marvelous message in an analogy. "you left behind promises, in your pretty pink pantoufles". "your brief presence lingers in your sweet scent" is a creative stroke to envy my dear friend. I bid you love and peace. Jon Michael

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on November 26, 2010
Very close to German, in that Pantoffeln is the word for slippers. Excellent poetry Regis. This is a keeper.

Reviewed on November 26, 2010
your words are so tenderly expressive to my heart Regis
your softness of love is carresive in each line
you are a garden of romance

Love's Bounty
Vickie

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on November 26, 2010
Regis,
I just love the sound of the word Pantoufles...but, for her to leave these behind, is key, one never leave behind their pantoufles..especially pink ones. Lovely romantic poetry, your heart sings in this one.

Peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by Steve Groll
Reviewed on November 26, 2010
I read it twice, delightful.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on November 26, 2010
Beautifully done, Regis.

Reviewed by Richard King
Reviewed on November 26, 2010
Ohhhh soooo sweet and what a nice promise too, STUPENDOUS Regis. Thank you, Dick

Reviewed by Lew Duffey
Reviewed on November 26, 2010
A wonderful love sonnet.
God bless,
Lew

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on November 26, 2010
Charming, fresh and tender ~
I hope she comes back for her slippers and so much more...
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed on November 26, 2010
sweet and endearing, romantic...........~Morgan

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on November 26, 2010
I enjoyed this poem very much, Regis.


Namaste
Tony

Reviewed by Maryvonne Chartrand (Reader)
Reviewed on November 26, 2010
That is more than beautiful Reg! I so enjoyed it!!

Reviewed by Laura Fall
Reviewed on November 26, 2010
Truly a touching poem as it leaves the reader with their heart that now flutters as the words are so divine bravo!

Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on November 26, 2010
Wonderful, and it creates such a blessed moment with that glance at the slippers. I love good moments like that.

John

Reviewed by Lena Kovadlo
Reviewed on November 26, 2010
You poem has a nice smooth flow and then toward the end it becomes slightly catchy. That does not ruin the poem's flow as I would have thought, but actually gives it an extra punch; I mean that in a good way. :)

Very nicely written. Has much emotion and great descriptive, vivid imagery throughout. I really enjoyed it!

I was going to ask you why you have a picture of a pair of slippers to go along with the poem but then I noticed on the bottom of the page you let readers know that pantoufles is a French word for slippers, so then it made sense.

Also, you are right on the money when you say "Inamimate objects can be powerfully symbolic..."

Now I am not sure if it is a typo or not but I want to point it out:
"you fly into my self" --> I would think it should say - you fly into myself

Thanks for sharing and please keep on writing.

Lena

Lena

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on November 26, 2010
Hey, if they fit, wear them, they look like they'd be warm...e

Reviewed by Chip Bergeron
Reviewed on November 26, 2010
If you were a Frencyh-Canadian kid growing up like me, the memories cascade out....your poem puts an adult spin on them....

Chip Bergeron


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