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Empty Hollow
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Empty Hollow

The storm passed
over a week ago
in this empty hollow.
The brush
is still scattered
untouched
for no eyes to see.
A stillness
lies at the end
of each ray
of sunlight;
the silence
is deafening.
A creaking door
footsteps
through the ceiling
the coffeepot dripping
all classic whispers
in how you define me;
broken down to
echoes and ghosts
that I chase
in the empty hollow.
What I could have said
or should have done,
fantasies, only
to reawaken the past.
The garden,
that cast beauty,
to as far
as the eye
could see,
has now vanished.
It’s image
haunts the shadows
in my eyes;
I search
again and again
for the caretaker
of this empty hollow.


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 Reviews of "Empty Hollow"
Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on August 28, 2002
Haunting write--especially like this:
"broken down to
echoes and ghosts
that I chase
in the empty hollow."

Reviewed by Tracey Hardie
Reviewed on August 28, 2002
I love the feeling of this on.. well done!!!!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 28, 2002
well done on form, progression and enviornment...

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on August 28, 2002
You have such great style in your word usage.
Such mastery of the lines and the flow of the idea. Great to read you. Bill

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
Reviewed on August 27, 2002
The feelings you managed to conjure up with this one are fantastic. Tim....
Jenni

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2002
Mysterious, but no mystery about the pain it images. I have to read ALL your work!

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2002
You have truly captured the emotions with this one.. Loved the parallels drawn.

Reviewed on August 27, 2002
Great feeling of loss! Well-described!!!!!

Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$


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