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The dilemma(First)
by David P Mohd → (All Poetry by David P Mohd)
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To my little one who doesn't know what is love. Dear innocent child.I am sorry my child.Because I'll never see you again. I'll never come before you.Because I love you. Here a long away from her, I pray for her.I know you will find a good handsome boy as your lover.And you will understand that I was right.I am sure...

Today, A fourteen year old, Girl said , “I love you”. For a moment, I was stunned, And I blinked at her. “Oh, dear child, Love is a divine passion. If you say the word to someone, You should be with him forever.” “I know what it means, And I love you. I really love you.” She has been my student, For last two months. How did she fall in love, With her Guru? “I love you too. But not in the way you want. I am your teacher, you are my student. That’s all. OK...?” “You said that love is the mercy of god. Love is kindness, love is beautiful… And I fell in love with you. But now you hear not me. Then why you said all that...?” I had told about love, “Life is short but love is long.” But how can I guess that my little student, Will fall in love with me one day? “Don’t you love me?” “I love you. But not in the way you do. ”Then she stared at me. I saw tears rolling in her eyes. Oh my god, What I did wrong- To be in a child’s dreams? The tears fell down. She didn’t dare to wipe it. I wanted to wipe, But I didn’t. “Now I know why don’t you love me. I am not so beautiful, I know…” Oh, she knows not How beautiful she is. “You want a beautiful, young lady, Not me, not me… Because I am not so beautiful.” Then she looked at me. “I can’t love anyone else. If you don’t love me, I’ll be in grave before tomorrow morning. How can I live without your love?” Her looks frightened me. And she was gone. What a little child you are my girl, What a little… Now I know love is a burden, It will be a burden if it comes one way. Now I feel the weight of love. It presses my heart. I know not What should I say tomorrow. I know not What should I say tomorrow.

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on March 6, 2004

Powerful sweet friend...
You did the right thing...
At 14 she is so young...

*Linda*

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on February 15, 2004

Great expressive thoughts, here! Warning: Dangerous territory ahead!Such experiences can be an honor and a terror! Guard youself, mislead her not, encourage her not. Yet explain truthfully why you dare not transgress beyond the teacher and student relationship. Remain teacher only to this minor.

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip

Reviewed on February 9, 2004

Very much a dilemma. Excellent write, David.
Best regards,
Leland

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on December 21, 2003

I thought you handled this very well, stay strong, Young Girls often develope a crush on their teachers and kind men, This was very moving,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on December 20, 2003

Beautiful write.....

Reviewed by Sara Cunningham

Reviewed on February 13, 2003

holy wow... made my chest ache... very very nice writing. i hope that it all works out for you

Reviewed by Nancy D.

Reviewed on February 4, 2003

Wow, handled with tender loving care, in time she will understand. Great write.
Nancy

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Very good. Love the 'love is a burden' lines.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Very good write and honest truth that this thing and conversation DO happen many times in many lives.

Hold yourself up as a teacher and no more than that. You should not get involved with a minor anyway.

Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$