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Finished
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One summer day while fishing, tired from casting to the stream,
I dozed off on the riverbank and I began to dream.
I dreamed that I was praying in a field beneath the sun,
I asked the Lord to please forgive me for some sin that I had done.

When I had finished praying I was much surprised to see,
That now there was another man standing there with me.
He said “I heard you praying and that’s very good to do,
But I really think I need to have a little talk with you”.

“I know that you believe in me and I think that you should know,
Just what it was I did for you so very long ago”.
“If you read in your bible then I think that you will see,
That I said that it was “finished” when I died there on that tree”.

“You’ve accepted what I did back then, and I’d think that that would do,
Or should I die upon that cross again just for you “?
I asked him then what should I say at times when I have sinned,
He said “ Just say I’m sorry Lord, then don’t do it again.

I wanted to say more to him but I didn’t have the time
For just then I was awakened by a tug upon my line,
With the dream still vivid in my mind I watched the river flow.
As I thanked him for forgiving me so very long ago.

Jack Roberts – December 14, 2002


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 Reviews of "Finished"
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 10, 2004
really well penned ...

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on September 7, 2004
You have defined the grandest gift from God so well.......this is so accurate......I bet God smiled when he read it!!!

I have just seen The Passion over the weekend, very strong intense movie, have you seen it yet?

You are a favorite of mine here......you should post more often!!!!!!!!!!
pax A

Reviewed on September 7, 2004
This was beautiful Jack, I am glad you reposted this, I never got a chance to read it,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on September 6, 2004
Jack, it's good to read you again even if it was a repost! You've been missed here Sir!

Lisa

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 5, 2004
Uplifting and a joy to read!

Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 5, 2004
Amen!

SueB

Reviewed on September 5, 2004
great stuff from you, jack! so nice to see you again; you have been missed! well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 5, 2004
You made the point well Jack!
Splendid poem about a splendid God!


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