some tracks goes write through your heart...boots and all...
lovely write
Love
Tinka
Reviewed by The Voice (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2003
Jack,
This is so true to life. Too often people trample their way through without using caution. One day they may hit that false floor of snow and fall to the darkness below.
nice write, jack! so enjoyed, and the pic reminds me of our backyard in ohio; lord, do i ever miss the snow! :( love, your (now texas) friend, karen lynn. :)
Hi Jack,
This is so true...
I love the way that you
put it all together in words...
Fantastic write!
Trixie :)
Reviewed by Tien Avielle (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2003
- and that is why I do not delete negative comments ... for in my heart, I feel they often reflect more negatively on the ones who post than on the one who wrote. A few here can be very cruel - thank goodness they are outnumbered by people like you.
Anyone that trespasses on the heart always leaves tracks. We all are loved by these footprints and your poem is a reminder to think about these treasures. Great Jack. I love these reminders.
Thank you also for all the kind reviews.
--susan
Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2003
"Our deeds will always be remembered"...this is a profound write, Jack!
When two men hit the reset button and decide to go out looking for the good in the world, they not only find it but also a lot more.
P.S. The title is listed on Amazon under Look for Something Good by Robert Drews (not by Robert H. Drews)
In "A Touch of Your Presence" are words that would inspire, encourage and strengthen one's soul when faced with challenges and difficulties and to know the awesomeness of God's power.
Chrissie
I love this write...It is so true...I enjoyed reading this..Excellent write..
Be blessed,
Betty
Best wishes
from
Kay
JC xoxoxoxo
Jenni
lovely write
Love
Tinka
This is so true to life. Too often people trample their way through without using caution. One day they may hit that false floor of snow and fall to the darkness below.
Great Write.
The Voice
This is so true...
I love the way that you
put it all together in words...
Fantastic write!
Trixie :)
Thank you also for all the kind reviews.
--susan
Love this!
Faye