I have been away
For a small bit of time
Now it seems this is no more
Just a place to post rhyme.
I like to mind my own business
But it does hurt my heart
When it looks like the Den
Is just falling apart
Some friends now are leaving
It’s so sad to say
What is it that happened?
To make it this way
To debate and to bicker
To me seems so wrong
On a poetry site
It just doesn’t belong
Perhaps back to the basics
Is what needs to be done?
When we all posted poems
And just had lots of fun
Keep in mind the one fix
That seems always be true
One person can’t argue
It always takes two
Jack Roberts
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Reviews of "What Happened?"
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on April 14, 2003
Poets, like artists and people in general have many sides and, when a family develops through such deep words, thoughts and feelings the negative aspects will show along with the positive. That is what makes us all real. I agree with your wisdom in this wonderful poem, but I can also understand why the flares will appear.
I agree Jack . I will do my part. Sorry to have been involved, but I just hope you are not next on his list to be targeted, although he rarely attacks men.He has been asked by the managment to delete the articles with my names in them. He wouldn't do it, but now I see that he has and is here under another of his names again.
WB JACK,
GREAT WRITE, AND OBSERVATION,
I AM HERE, TO WRITE AND TRY TO EXPRESS MY FEELINGS, JUST SHARING POETRY WITH OTHER WONDERFUL WRITERS LIKE YOURSELVES.
WIILIAM
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on April 13, 2003
Good write and I hope it will be so but controversy is a part of life it seems and a part of free speech, however it's gone a bit beyond that in some cases. Well penned, Jack.
Good poem, good message,and good way to look at the truth. I believe there are enough real people here at AD to keep the site alive and well. I'm sorry for those good poets who feel they must leave.
Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)
Reviewed on April 13, 2003
Blessed are the peacemakers. You're a true treasure, Jack.
Controversy is life, for better or for worse. Spring is enroute and some can only write as time allows . . . like me. Your poem did wake me up though that I ought to read, talk and thank others more.
(Currently I'm trying to home-school Doogie until he can attend school again.)
Like your 'wake-up' writing though.
Sandy
Welcome back, Jack. I missed you. Thanks for the wise words, I hope things can go back to the way they should be. Loved this poem, so concise, compact and creative. You do good work on many levels, my friend.
I'm with you, Jack. I have anxious trepidations, now, sadly wishing I could mediate or help in some way, I've hardly penned a word in the last two weeks...and some of my friends have left... Strong write, sad subject.
yes it takes two to tango.....two to create...and two to be true friends.....howzit my friend.....I missed you here.....enjoyed your write.....but must admit i enjoyed to read the fight toooo...lol
Yes, it's true! Life is just too complicated as it is, there is so much sadness around us; but I noticed that at this time people take out their sadness and frustration on each other, and I think this is wrong. However, I also agree with Elizabeth, when the frustration and the madness is gone, this too shall pass.
Thank you Jack for expressing what so many of us here in the Den feel. I agree with Elizabeth though, this too shall pass.
Jill
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on April 13, 2003
Yeah it does take two Jack, and I fear at times I've a big mouth....I get really heated on some things, you are of course quite right...we are here to write ...so let us write....Great thoughts...ty, Danielle
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on April 13, 2003
So true. This too shall pass.
Well done, Jack. Bravo.
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GREAT WRITE, AND OBSERVATION,
I AM HERE, TO WRITE AND TRY TO EXPRESS MY FEELINGS, JUST SHARING POETRY WITH OTHER WONDERFUL WRITERS LIKE YOURSELVES.
WIILIAM
great expression of thoughts.
(Currently I'm trying to home-school Doogie until he can attend school again.)
Like your 'wake-up' writing though.
Sandy
I totally agree...
This is a place to share our thoughts...
Not to argue...
Bravo!!!
Trixie
Bobbi
Reindeer
Chrissie
this is the funside of me talking okay!!!!
Love
Tinka
Sandie Angel :o)
Jill
Well done, Jack. Bravo.