"So rounding the corner of the world he disappeared"
Etude: Thirteen by Thirteen
thirteen lines of thirteen syllables
He turned out like his father as his mother had feared Made the same mistake and thought it best to go to sea Out of sight and out of mind seemed a good place to be So rounding the corner of the world he disappeared But once around the corner he saw it was in vain To go since what goes around just comes around again
No matter how far we flee we can never be free Of the wheel of the real of the turning of the pain Of the burning of the learning of the suffering Of rounding the corner of the world to disappear To go all the way around to be found right back here Where we started and departed from once long ago
Nicely done, Stevie; and most meaningful. I also appreciate the attention to structure (13-13). That cannot be easily achieved. Thank you. Love and peace,
Regis
Reviewed by Laura Mayer (Reader)
Reviewed on April 3, 2007
Liked this one a lot Steve, we go around and around and end up in the same place...so true.
Hugs, Laura
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the message laid nicely on top
Outstanding!!!!
Regis
Hugs, Laura