"Never use that fine end of your pocket comb"
Grandpa cautioned me as we were walking home
While not doubting his admonishing intent
I nonetheless have no idea what he meant
Perhaps he feared those tiny teeth injurious
Though I may never know now I am curious
Should I ever see him again I might ask
Beyond such misunderstanding as might mask
This mystery of the fine end of the comb
Should we meet again having found our way home
II
I am new to the zoo but here I am now
Wet behind the ears wearing short years long
But scheming and plotting to escape somehow
As I will do when I finish my song
Why do those old lions look at me that way
With something which looks for the world like pity
Not for the lifers but the daytrippers they
Who are swept each night from this unreal city?
Come and wash off the stain of me with a hose
The zoo is the zoo as (now) everyone knows
III
This is a snapshot of your existence:
You will get there despite your persistence
And then when you get there you might arrive
Where Charlie surfs and you come home alive
You saddled up and went out on patrol
Without knowing what you were looking for
So they got your body but not your soul
The time returns to saddle up once more
And should you spy me aiming from a tree
Just know that I am not your enemy
IV
I combed with the wide end for all of those years
Until my hair went grey and my whiskers white
I combed and I combed but did I get it right
(I guess maybe not if I still have these fears)?
I finally have to use the fine end now
(Duly admonished) out of necessity
I could never follow anyone but me
There was no one in front of me anyhow
Deep in the jungle forgotten awhile
Walk in those boots if for only a mile
I love this. I really do. What the heck is wrong with the fine end of a comb? --sort of Lillipution like sentiments, and puzziling. So hard, we struggle against our own personal rebeliousness to try and live up to those we look up to, but when you get right down to it, there's no way of knowing which maxims are true unless we live up to their expectations. --or maybe we never know, and are left wondering. ... I'm rambling. But this poem just haunts me...
This is my personal inspirational book of poetry. It contains many poems written for family, friends, and relevant life situations. Hopefully you will find some that will encourage and inpsire you in whatever arena you are found in your circle of l
You have a strong poetic style to tell this journey of a curiosity/question & then understandings in this poetic express.
Embrasse'
Vickie
Beautifully penned - each another slice of life - well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Axilea