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Someday When We Look Back
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"The part we never part with is our soul"


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Someday When We Look Back

Someday when we look back on all of this
Even if only in heaven by half
Or God forbid only in hell by whole
The only thing to do then is to laugh
To see this from above or from below
Instead of in the middle of it all
And to know we shared a very near miss
Prevented from falling even as we
Spun in the spiral of our fatal fall
Seen from the future of a frightened past

Where we stumbled through a shadowed valley
Of death where breath is never known to last
Past where heartbeat stops when then we must go
From darkness to where they say we can see
The whole of things (but then they may not know)
A perspective change from vain to so vast
It took life to get that fast from that slow
Up to see meaning in its entirety

They say it waits there on top of the hill
A truth so true that no one can control
What seems an improbable climb to me
Although I never was a mountaineer
To climb by blind faith believing that day
Will dawn at last after our night spent here
But I need the exercise anyway
If anyone can see something we will
If not me then you (as you always do)
And if you see it first then show me too

Our climb in any case is underway
We only took what we needed to be
Ourselves our way no matter what they say
The part we never part with is our soul

The only thing to do then is to laugh

+Steven Curtis Lance



Copyright MMVIII


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 Reviews of "Someday When We Look Back"
Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on April 2, 2008
In and out of half phrases like a body in an almost coma --"Even if only in heaven by half"--"only in hell by whole"--"a shadowed valley
Of death where breath is never known to last..." I love the inner rhymes and plays on eachother... sounds marry and merge, then disolve into the next alliterations...
And that all works very well with this particular poem on the whole-- death, a serious subject, and all that word-play going on-- but it's just beautiful. --Charlie

Reviewed by Lew Duffey
Reviewed on April 2, 2008
Well written.
God Bless,
Lew

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on April 2, 2008
Good write and I enjoyed it's religious aspects.

Reviewed on April 1, 2008
Steven,

Inspired, inspiring lines of thought provoking excellence - well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on April 1, 2008
Steven,
WOW I Love This & We Never Do Part From Our Souls
I Love That 3rd Stanza!
"Our climb in any case is underway
We only took what we needed to be
Ourselves our way no matter what they say
The part we never part with is our soul"

Embrassé
Vickie


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