As much appreciated as little understood
I am surprised to be cared about
But what I care about is caring makes me feel good
And forget what I was scared about
Every one of us has a reason to feel alone
But to be cared about is to have your reason known
(We smile at one another while stupid people shout)
I have my reason known now and am always surprised
Although alone to have my loneliness realized
Where my loneliness goes the rest will have to follow
Although it can only be unique
An interior spacescape beautiful but hollow
Cared about (surrounded) as we speak
"Interior Spacescape" awesome phrase...in a world so focused on the exterior, we often forget, neglect, and nearly abandon the interior...which is where the exterior is born...often humanity makes me laugh!
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As I read your poem, I doubt that he poet's interior
spacescape is all that hollow. - Gene.
This line says it all...I love it, where my loneliness goes the rest will have to follow...Pic. is hauntingly lonely.
From a long lost friend, Safi