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Break down to

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Sunday, March 27, 2011

Maybe I should break down to
if that's what's needed to get some attention from you

All around yo people fall apart
they've turned catching your attention into an art

Soon it won't be needed to pretend
and you'll have yourself another mess to mend

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Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on March 28, 2011

Elisabeth, it is the will to defy the status quo that gets noticed and is ultimately embraced by those that have care. For those that do not appreciate the determination, hold no true value to us. I bid you peace,joy and love my dear friend. Jon Michael

Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill

Reviewed on March 28, 2011

Good rhythm and rhyme. Nice write Elisabeth. I can feel the angst.

Peace,
Dayvid

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