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Kid's under construction
by Will Bates → (All Poetry by Will Bates)
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"Will you bow down love?"
"Hear my scripted srimmage of snide"

Rhetorical quest ?
Yes, I'll dance
Break caps on the floor
Love this style
Been here once a twice before
Fluorescent moon
Facial eclipse
You should see you from this view
A few misplaced hair's on head
Peach fuzz forest ears
So red those California mountain sides burn
I dub you daughter deity this evening
Heard every calculated word of breathing
No, don't break character Beth

This act ain't Fin yet
Place a privy palm on my head
Bless this scamp
That piece of inner thigh
You won't need it
Ah.....now eye to eye
Throw some dung hay here with me
Shaved smooth, degree holdin' ape
Fun...eh
Crude slick ladder
Slide down to your boy
Strike a match
We'll set this barn a blaze
Oh...That broodmare she can come too
We'll ride bareback to your silverspoon......

 

 

(c)2009 will bates

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Kid's under construction"
Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on April 13, 2009
Will,
I caught the great use of language in the first half of this poem but not the import of your words quite; the second half I found much more meaningful and worthwhile...and the final lines striking, literally and metaphorically.
John

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on April 13, 2009
I don't think my "construction" has been completed yet, and I am like older than I thought I would ever live...Peace thru the Write, Ed

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on April 13, 2009
Expressive life of teenage years, perhaps from today, but it could also be applied to years past. Never easy growing up in this world, trying to find a niche. A piece well written....

Be always safe,
Karen


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