Only a fool would put out
into this surreal calm,
for the seasoned sailor knows
the timeless energy of the sea has
been sucked into the approaching storm.
Soon, the hand of fate will
toss the dice in
violent clattering across the void,
wind and wave in
chilling power, crashing,
smashing
everything it its path.
Cloud upon cloud, piling,
piling, higher and higher,
lightning strobes
exposing the intent of
nature's wrath.
Soon, the hand of fate will
toss the dice in
violent clattering across the void,
wind and wave in
chilling power, crashing,
smashing
everything it its path.
Fools bob in their tiny craft,
putting, putting
across the bay. Their
folly screams through
shoreline trees.
Soon, the hand of fate will
toss the dice in
violent clattering across the void,
wind and wave in
chilling power, crashing,
smashing
everything it its path.
...BUT IF YOU KNOW 'HE' WHO CALMS THE 'SEA'....WHY NOT? GOOD WRITE WITH TERRIFIC IMAGERY...ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Undone by the power of the Storm in your words - agree with Peter. Are you sure you aren't related to Poseidon? WOW. My new favorite of yours - you KNOW a StormSpinner's gotta love this one. And I do. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
My favorite line: lightning strobes/exposing the intent/of nature's wrath. YES!!!!!!
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on August 12, 2009
Oh man, that's great stuff Dallas. Beautiful description of wind, weather and sea. You really have a knack for that. Must have the bloodlines of Poseidon! Take care.
In the second book of the BetterWorld trilogy, Kiyoko and her friends continue to fight MediaCorp's schemes to control the world. But a team of ruthless mercenaries is after them, and is closing in fast.
In the second book of the BetterWorld trilogy, Kiyoko and her friends continue to fight MediaCorp's schemes to control the world. But a team of ruthless mercenaries is after them, and is closing in fast.
The most difficult thing that two humans can attempt is to communicate. No, not talk, communicate! Most relational problems are either caused by or aggravated by a failure to communicate properly. Learn how to do just that, communicate. See how much
Be always sfae,
Karen
your poem captures the turbulence of being set afloat on the hand of fate ...
Ron
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Undone by the power of the Storm in your words - agree with Peter. Are you sure you aren't related to Poseidon? WOW. My new favorite of yours - you KNOW a StormSpinner's gotta love this one. And I do. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
My favorite line: lightning strobes/exposing the intent/of nature's wrath. YES!!!!!!