Hell storms are brewing, brewing, brewing
Fast and furious, they are approaching
Their spew is vomit of greed and hate
Dooming mankind to a horrid fate
Hell storms are brewing, brewing, brewing
Yet mankind heeds not signs of warning
We abuse and kill, pollute and destroy
True quality of life, we no longer enjoy
Hell storms are brewing, brewing, brewing
As we watch tv screens, unthinking, unblinking
Absorbing perversion and programed lies
As humanity and its values die, die, die
I nice energy and urgency, and absolutely true as well. A great write. Secular Humanism feeds the desires of the heart, and not all of them or wise. A new darkage has stolen over this country and many don't see it, confusing technology and progressiveness for the traits of an advanced society, ignoring the soul it needs to live.
Beautiful penned words that tell of the rage of the time we are living in. Sad but so true it's scary. I forsee it not getting better but worse as Hell's Storm Rages Forward.
like all/most have said here
powerful urgent piece that need to be heeded to........
some people are just not getting it
it is not like a home we can tear down by our neglect
and move somewhere else to startover she will have her say
excellent piece that should be shippedoutto these politicans who are not about saving the planet
The voice of prophecy in this poem is very urgent, absorbing, and compelling. I suspect that much of the disturbance expressed by various readers is because most of us know that the hell storms are not just "brewing," but in fact are outright raging all over the world. Some of us are just fortunate enough to have been insulated from them. Be that as it may, these are not only powerful thought-provoking words but a powerful soul-shaking vision.
This is so disturbing. I read this just before bed and hope I don't have nightmares as a result. The main reason why I find it disturbing is that it is so sadly accurate.
Well written!
Chanti
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on February 17, 2005
I agree that more than just hell storms are brewing because hate still seems to occupy a lot of minds.
How right you are Gwen! I've concluded that no one cares to hear it. I guess because it is seen so much on TV it becomes overwhelming so they tune it out! Excellent power poem! We can always pray!;-)
Powerfully penned, Gwen.
I truly believe these hell storms have been brewing for quite some time now, and it truly is time we took note of them - before it's too late.
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Beautiful penned words that tell of the rage of the time we are living in. Sad but so true it's scary. I forsee it not getting better but worse as Hell's Storm Rages Forward.
Sherry
powerful urgent piece that need to be heeded to........
some people are just not getting it
it is not like a home we can tear down by our neglect
and move somewhere else to startover she will have her say
excellent piece that should be shippedoutto these politicans who are not about saving the planet
Well written!
Chanti
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powerful poem!
I can feel the power in this one!!
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I truly believe these hell storms have been brewing for quite some time now, and it truly is time we took note of them - before it's too late.