Misleading advertising
Inducements for spending
Mindless compliance
Commercials sing:
I'll make you handsome -- pretty
Sexy -- happy
Buy bigger -- better -- more
More -- than your neighbor
We embrace this fallacy
This thoughtless mentality
Appeasing our insecurity
Corporate giants merging -- ever growing
Their political power -- influencing our lives
Their "for profit" choices -- deciding our destiny
Citizens heavily in debt? -- You bet!
Dependency upon life-style necessities
Mostly met -- by foreign producers
Tell me -- do we:
Make or grow anything -- here -- anymore?
Tell me -- Re-assure me -- Educate me -- please!
Alas -- our heads are in the sand
We've got credit cards -- say all's okay
To hell with saving for a rainy day
We can't spend fast enough
Continue to buy more needless stuff
Pop-up poetry
Commercial insanity -- spawned of industry
A frantic -- "covet" -- "buy me now" policy
A most successful -- mass manipulation of society
Amazing the levels that corporate america will sink in order to make that dollar! Imagine the psychological long term effects these tactics have on our children. Needed to be said. Thanks-HB
Reviewed by Dennis Keister (Reader)
Reviewed on March 18, 2007
We make most of the things we drink and all the snack food and most of the movies. So stay home with someone you love and maybe after the movie is over you can make something else? Dennis
OMG Gwen, you said it all!!! The second stanza also reminds me of how Wisconsin voted on one of our referendums on Tuesday:
Misleading advertising
Inducements for spending
Mindless compliance
But then politics is nothing more than a shopping trip, to get the public to buy, regardless of how false the advertising is.
Thanks for sharing Gwen.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on October 23, 2006
alas..the truth!
great write..
vesna.)
Reviewed by Russ Okamura (Reader)
Reviewed on October 21, 2006
This poem is filled with great passion and truth. you delivered this with real power. Awesome work.
I'll buy that for a dollar...oh yes! Let's follow the corporate whore with her dazzling array of trinkets. Brilliant write Gwen, there is much insight and wisdom within your words. Let's hope people begin to wake up to what's really going on.
Blessings
Paul;-)
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on October 16, 2006
Yep, you said it ... modern brainwashing of the people or, should I say "sheeple"?
Dear Gwen, Good Grief, pop up ads are embedded in the PCs now - mine is not linked to the Internet, yet I keep getting pop ups to protect my computer from viruses and so on. But your poem reminded me of my pet peeve, is the deceptive ads of corporations who abuse the word "integrity" in their mission statements. Oh, but get a magnifying glass and look at the fine print, they say, and you'll see our ad was not deceptive. David
Cleverly penned, Gwen, the media has stooped to new lows in order to make a buck. Shame. I don't even have the bucks to buy what they're advertising............well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on October 12, 2006
The media is hell bent on twisting our minds. Great poem. Victor
Wow! You have hit this button dead on! It puts in mind what a full explanation of my "Perfidious Perversions" might be. Excellent factual poetry Gwen! Kudo's!
so true...
as for me, i just don't watch TV nor listen to the radio nor read newspapers... still my head in the sand and make believe, knowing there is no reality.
Hey I have the perfect product for you. This wonderful software package blocks pop-ups forever. Never be annoyed by those pop-ups again. It only costs.....and on and on it goes. Is there nothing without a price tag anymore?
Good Write,
God Bless,
Lew
I am so sad to say that all Western civilizations have ended up going this way and your Pop Up Poetry describes it in an all too real fashion. Good lesson.
Scary isn't it? A society once totally self-sufficient now finds themselves completely dependent upon others and other countries for our selfish needs. Could we ever go back? It's possible, but not at the rate we are now.
Thanks for the wake up!
All too true in a secular soon to be godless society if others have their way. We are digging our own graves by buying from countries like China where almost everthing you buy comes from them. We are making them a superpower with our own money, whose ambitions to rule the world are not fantasy. Our corporations have sold us out to foreign cheap labor.
Modern labour theories and practice. Covers issues like employment, unemployment, migration, brain drain, entrepreneurship, workaholism, and trade unions.
While Debtors prisons no longer exist, many people continue to be persecuted for crimes related to poverty or inability to repay money owed to municipalities. This practice remains in an injustice that needs to be rectified.
Well-done . . . an exceptional poem - thanks for this one!!
Hugs,
Lance
Misleading advertising
Inducements for spending
Mindless compliance
But then politics is nothing more than a shopping trip, to get the public to buy, regardless of how false the advertising is.
Thanks for sharing Gwen.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."
great write..
vesna.)
Blessings
Paul;-)
Love & Light,
Joseph
Regis
A full package of poetic tasks duly delivered in "Pop-Up Poetry".
I salute You, Poet.
Andre Emmnuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
I try not to look a commercial
they seem to insult my intelliegence
Love & Peace
William
I always sift the Good from the Bad..
I just turn off mentally...and only take in what I want too..
Powerful write
God Bless
Peter
What a tremendous bit of poetic lament - and exacting truth - of the decline of the once Greatest Nation on Earth.
With God out of the picture, every good and perfect gift goes, too...
Super-catchy title, Gwen!
Love, Rhonda
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Eileen
Love Tinka
as for me, i just don't watch TV nor listen to the radio nor read newspapers... still my head in the sand and make believe, knowing there is no reality.
Good Write,
God Bless,
Lew
Fee
Thanks for the wake up!
Lisa