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Loss of a Friend
by Debra Lohrere → (All Poetry by Debra Lohrere)
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I grab, but miss
Her hand misses mine and she falls
She screams
Fire engulfs her and then night engulfs the fire
Alone so cold I stand
Fear clutches my throat
A scream
Her scream?
No the wind
A call for help?
No, a bird flutters by.
Sound then resound that high pitched cry that killed her
How she lived then died before me
Again resound the wail I made
The scream I screamed.
The heartache
The loss of a friend, a lifelong companion
The loss almost my fault for missing her hand
I tried so hard to grasp

Alone so cold I stand
Dazed and numb
The building still burns and the sirens get louder and louder.

 

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 Reviews of "Loss of a Friend"
Reviewed by Debbie Edmiaston
Reviewed on September 24, 2002
Wow! Chillbumps.....
How sad; hope it's fictional.
You did a wonderful job, Debra!
Debbie :)

Reviewed on September 24, 2002
>shivers < intense and emotional...grabbed me by the heart and wouldn't let go...super write! hope it's fictional...(((HUGS))) anyway...love, karla. :(

Reviewed on September 24, 2002
wow, this is really intense, debra!! super job!! love, your new friend, karen lynn. ((HUGS))

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
Reviewed on September 24, 2002
What an extremely emotional write... Welcome to the Den Debra.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on September 24, 2002
Sad heartfelt write.. Intense
emotions in this piece.
Peg


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