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I've been working on the railroad
by Patrick A Granfors → (All Poetry by Patrick A Granfors)
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It's time folks.

It’s hard to turn a train around

That’s rolling down its track

It goes straight in one direction

There is no going back

 

There are no exit sidings

To reverse this old train’s course

No way to do a U-turn

With straight rails that enforce

 

And as this train builds up its speed

And the curves begin to strain

As the ballast starts to crumble

And the ties cry out in pain

 

As the rails begin to separate

And the cold wheels plow the ground

Sinking deeply into the mire

The forward motion loss profound

 

This reminds me of our nation

Once bountiful and grounded

The envy of the world

Proud citizens abounded

 

Now the bounty dwindles

As the pride begins to fade

Half the next generation

Can’t get beyond the eighth grade

 

We manufacture nothing

We consume with weakened dollars

Talk of cut entitlements

Brings on panic and loud hollers

 

We’ve dug ourselves into a hole

It’s time to throw the shovel out

And get back to simple principles

We should have never done without

 

Don’t spend more money than you make

That includes us AND Uncle Sam

Quit expecting handouts

When get yourself into a jam

 

Personal responsibility for one’s own actions

Is not a questionable demand

It’s the primary foundation

Of the cornerstone of our land

 

 

 

Copyright 2009 Patrick A. Granfors

 

 


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 Reviews of "I've been working on the railroad"
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on December 12, 2009
Splendid piece Patrick! You are once again spot on,
and I thank you for sharing the truth we all need to heed!

Merry Christmas
With Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on December 12, 2009
Amen and alleluia. If you don't have it don't spend it. Simple, so simple. Excellent write. Liz

Reviewed by Bennett Kremen
Reviewed on December 12, 2009
Yes, what did you expect from this "Greed is good" suicide ride America's been on to a fair- thee- well?

Reviewed on December 12, 2009
Couldn't have said it any better than you have right here, Conductor. =] Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on December 12, 2009
The runaway train of America, who the heck let that conductor to get up in the loco? And this time we can't blame Amtrack people!!!

Georg


Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 12, 2009
We’ve dug ourselves into a hole,
It’s time to throw the shovel out

And that proverbial hole really does extend all the way to China. They now lend us money, manufacture most of our goods, and even provide a substantial amount of our food. It's a deep hole, indeed, my friend. And I wonder if we'll ever find a ladder tall enough, to get out.


Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on December 12, 2009
VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe
Reviewed on December 12, 2009
I like the imagery here, and the unexpected twist. Words of wisdom that all should embrace. Well written.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on December 12, 2009
The truth and nothing but the truth in this writing, Patrick. Very well done.

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on December 11, 2009
You cannot bring about prosperity by discouraging thrift. You cannot strengthen the weak by weakening the strong. You cannot help the wage earner by pulling down the wage payer. You cannot further the brotherhood of man by encouraging class hatred. You cannot help the poor by destroying the rich. You cannot keep out of trouble by spending more than you earn. You cannot build character and courage by taking away man's initiative and independence. You cannot help men permanently by doing for them what they could and should do for themselves.--- Abraham Lincoln

Reviewed on December 11, 2009
And I couldn't agree more with ya! It's time to make our nation a nation FOR the people, BY the people, and stop letting the government take over!! God help us ALL!!!! Great write, Patrick!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on December 11, 2009
AND A 'GRAND' RAILROAD IT IS! THANKS FOR SHARING YOUR OPINIONS AND WORDS OF WISDOM. BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS


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