Reality Check (poem) by Patrick A Granfors on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 11, 2011

An omelet, huh??? Well to make an omelet you have to break some eggs...like me, you must be bit "cracked...."

Chip Bergeron

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on July 8, 2011

Clever and delightful as usual, Patrick. Please keep on spoiling us with your wit and humor. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Tom poesyco.th@gmail.com

Reviewed on July 5, 2011

DAN ... WELL SAID!

IF THERE WERE NO CHICKEN,
THEN THERE COULD BE NO EGG!
UNLESS THERE WAS A DUCK ...
ARE YOU PULLIN' MY LEG?

PERHAPS THE QUESTION -
SHOULD BE BEGGED ...
WITHOUT A ROOSTER -
NO FERTILIZATION OF AN EGG -
THUS - NO CHICKEN COULD HATCH -
SO - I VOTE FOR THE ROOSTER ...
TO WIN THE MATCH !!!

TOM...

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on July 5, 2011

you make some good points here--very clever!

Reviewed by Paul Judges

Reviewed on July 5, 2011

Excellent writing, Patrick

Reviewed by Chessly Nesci

Reviewed on July 4, 2011

Patrick, Can I just tell you how much your writing helps me when I'm down. Your writing will live on forever and ever...You are amazing! And I will never forget you! :) oh, and an omelet is better than a plain old egg anytime! Take care my friend and happy 4th! :)

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on July 4, 2011

Oh, but Patrick, what about your poetry, your writing!!!
I see yourself in every line that entertains, inspires, and perpetuates the YOU that we are so lucky to have in our midst.

Christine

Reviewed by Lonnie Hicks

Reviewed on July 4, 2011

This took me aback. So very powerful Patrick and profound in its profundity. Great write.

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on July 4, 2011

Ah! But how could we forget you my humorous friend??? You have been imortalized in cyberspace!

Anna

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on July 4, 2011

definitely you...e

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on July 4, 2011

Okay, I'll forget you, then. But what will we do with all these insightful poems that will hang around cyberspace for damn near eternity! Unfortunately, when you started writing poetry and posting it, you entered immortality. Sorry.

Me? I'd rather be a chicken and cross the road.

Ron

Reviewed by pat medlin

Reviewed on July 4, 2011

a sad loss indeed...for the world that is....a world in serious need of genes such as yours.

well this could lead to all sorts of scary bloviation on topics of the state of what sort of genes ARE being passed on....and in profusion.

i really hate to start out this glorious monday morning with such depressive thoughts....hey! who started this...the chicken or the omlet...hmmmm

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on July 4, 2011

Nice rhyming

Reviewed by Mark Lichterman

Reviewed on July 3, 2011

What a depressive story, my friend. Must be all of today's heat that got to you... Actually, it was so hot today you should have been a fried egg.
Mark