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SOMETHING AINT RIGHT
by John W Townsend → (All Poetry by John W Townsend)
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Lost love always hurts, and the guy in this poem is the same.

Sun on the sand

catching my eyes

as the waves roll out,

out of sight,

what am I doing here,

wasting my time.

I look at the surf

follow the line

watch all the people

having  fun

that should be me

but somethings wrong.

Lost all my life

she walked away

never said a word

thats why I am

here today

where we used to be

down by the sea.

Time to change

I tell myself

can't get out of neutral

theres too much pain

I want her back again

so the sun on the sand

thats washed by the sea

brings back the memory

of what used to be

and something aint right

she took all my life.

 


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 Reviews of "SOMETHING AINT RIGHT"
Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on November 24, 2009
Something ain't right for sure.
I'm sure I'm among a crowd that can relate to this offering.
Well put.

John


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