Concord (poem) by Paul Berube on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on December 23, 2007

Paul,

A strong voice in these verses. I love the effect of the first verse and the message in the last verse! Only those who have known war can truly know the full meaning of these feelings. I can only read and appreciate them. Thank you for sharing these thoughts. Hugs:)

Sheila

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on January 20, 2007

Wow! I really really really like ths!
A Keeper for me to read again another time!
I hope you don't mind~

Your mind is deep as usual!
I do appreciate you!
And... Your writing style is unique
I find most complete

WArmest HuGs, Warrior Sheeeooxx

Reviewed by Ann Piatt

Reviewed on May 25, 2004

Bravo, Paul! The last stanza sums it all up. :)

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on May 19, 2004

Intense.......fine work again Paul....your words have much strength of soul....That is what many try.... but can't quite pull off.....You Sir are a fine poet indeed.....you don't miss a beat!

ty, Dani

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on May 13, 2004

This was powerful and excellent..Laughing at Andy's comment!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Andrea Da Costa (Reader)

Reviewed on May 13, 2004

Very powerful and smooth flowing poem!
Wonderful writing Paul.

Andrea

Reviewed by Ann Piatt

Reviewed on May 9, 2004

This is a very melodic piece...the flow is very well done. "The warrior cannot cheat the reaper..." Now that line right there...very vivid!

Ann

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)

Reviewed on May 5, 2004

You have really brought to life the cost of war in your poetic words of wisdom.

Fletcher B.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 4, 2004

Brilliant work Paul!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on May 3, 2004

WONDERFUL flow of expressions in this poem...BRILLIANT work!

Reviewed by andrea coltman

Reviewed on May 2, 2004

Exceptionally well expressed..really enjoyed this...best wishes Andrea

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on May 1, 2004

Deep thoughts well-expressed, Paul. Thank you for this offering. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on May 1, 2004

This write makes a profound impact, Paul, and that last stanza could be written in stone - or, perhaps, blood is sadly more appropriate. Stunning. Thank you. Kate

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on May 1, 2004

I+m saving this one..it's incredible...

Vesna...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 30, 2004

Paul you mesmerized me with this profound gem!
Your last verse brought tears, exceptional poetry!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on April 30, 2004

Resistance is futile

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on April 30, 2004

Paul, this is an absolutely awesome write! The depth in this goes so far beyond where most has ever been.
Thank you! Lisa

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on April 30, 2004

Powerful and profound write!

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on April 30, 2004

Death is not a stranger.
It toils beyond existence,
counting each amplified step
as I stumble upon its' haunt.

Paul....such a stunning write....excellent!!!!

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on April 30, 2004

A profound, extremely well written poem, Paul.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on April 30, 2004

On this fortieth day of Spring I Salute You,
Sublime Poet Paul Berube!

>>>>>>>>>>"Concord" is written with words dictated by a wise soul, and poetized by an artit of the VERB.

Enjoyed reading this armory filled with sharp sWORDs!

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on April 30, 2004

This is incredible, such a powerful poem. Highly emotive yet so masterfully understated.

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on April 30, 2004

I can't tell you how very good this is!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on April 30, 2004

A very captivating write, Paul.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on April 30, 2004

paul,
This is an awesome tale in your
unique style.
Death never lets us cheat forever
and this one is excellent in the reminder
of the blessings we should count each and
every day.
Missed you Friend....
"I sheathe my sword in glory
fearing what shall be.
Weariness tortures this soul
as was with all those long ago.

Death is not a stranger.
It toils beyond existence,
counting each amplified step
as I stumble upon its' haunt."

Lady Peg

\Have a beautiful day and weekend Paul!!!!