Spaced (poem) by Paul Berube on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on June 5, 2004

I'm with Dana........I adore your rhyme......but then again......you KNOW i love rhyme.....

This was great stuff paul....

Born of woman, wealth in grace,
tears you've borne remain a brace.
Hearts of stone, yet wrapped in lace,
a product of the human race. <----This part! I can relate!

Really love your work.......ty, Dani

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on June 2, 2004

"Spaced" is written in single heptameter rhyme. A classic poetic composition of profoundity packed in belles-letters.

Health and Creativity.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 31, 2004

excellent rhyme ...

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on May 30, 2004

Thought provoking write!

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on May 29, 2004

Wonderful job.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 29, 2004

Lovely rhyme and flow in this brilliant poem Paul!

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on May 29, 2004

Better than I can do.

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on May 28, 2004

Awesome write, Paul!
Excellent!!

~Linda

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on May 28, 2004

Excellent write!

Reviewed by Sheila Jones (Reader)

Reviewed on May 28, 2004

This is sensational, Paul!
Beautiful, and so skillfully written!

Love, Sheila

Reviewed by Poetry Deborah

Reviewed on May 28, 2004

Paul, this was excellent. So much said with so few words. I thoroughly enjoyed this one. I too love rhyme, but write a good deal of both rhyme and free verse. Loved it!

Deborah :o))

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on May 28, 2004

Paul superb and full of wisdom I loved the last stanza......

Miss it when your not writing have a beautiful Weekend and holiday...

Peggy

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on May 28, 2004

Excellent Paul, I loved the rhyme and poem!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on May 28, 2004

WONDERFUL write in quartain...Nice rhyme, Paul!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on May 28, 2004

Hearts of stone, yet wrapped in lace,
a product of the human race.

So sadly true, of so many human beings. Enjoyed this, Paul.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on May 28, 2004

You use rhyme well Paul and this is a wonderful poem.

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)

Reviewed on May 28, 2004

Hey Paul...this is a very ingenius, insightful write...you are right on the money...a cold stony heart these days is a product of the human race...Fletcher B

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 28, 2004

Wow this is good...excellent Paul!!

Hey I am a good heart okay!!...lol!!

Love Tinka