It Had To Be (poem) by Paul Berube on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on January 1, 2008

Paul,

This one is perfect as is. A strong, inspirational message too. Fantastic write! ~Sheila

Reviewed by Theresa curnow (Reader)

Reviewed on April 29, 2007

Brilliant and I too would like to hear it set to music. Love the words and the flow of it. love, Theresa.

Reviewed on March 14, 2007

I'm not equiped to critique...matter of fact, i'd love to try my hand at lyrics sometime....and when I do, I;ll ask you for your help. I think this is terrific.
Love, Taylor

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on March 2, 2007

I think it's Perfect the way it is!
VEry intense feelings throughout Paul!
Great write!
Sounds likes a good tune coming our way.

WArmly, WArrior Sheeeoox

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on February 28, 2007

This is verrrrrrrrry good. Should be set to melody
pax A

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on February 27, 2007

Awesome song, Paul! It's like marching on after a storm has passed. I'd love to hear this on my radio!

Blessings to you,
~Linda

Reviewed by Jean Pike

Reviewed on February 22, 2007

Beautiful song, paul. Wish I could hear it set to music!

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on February 21, 2007

Oooohhhh!!!!! Nice song, Paul!!!!!! Very inspiring!!!!!

Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on February 21, 2007

Fantastic song with natural lyrics hidden within. Thanks

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on February 20, 2007

Love the rhythm and the theme. The only suggestion I have is to
replace condescend with something more concrete. All the other words you have chosen are simple and direct. How about something along the lines of "The light will guide me now/ that I have made it 'round the bend?" or "come around the bend?" or...hmmm...."that I am on the mend?" You can do a lot better. Just trying to get across my thoughts. Thank you for putting a song in my heart. 'Pea' <3

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on February 19, 2007

once we overcome fear all possibilities are open ... the format of this poem works perfectly, Paul ...

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on February 19, 2007

It flows well, .Perhaps it could be made a little longer with a few more verses. I think most songs last about 2 to 3 min.. Of course with an arrangement and musical interludes , the time would be extended.. Well done......M

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on February 18, 2007

Sounds good to me Paul, of course through other eyes things can always be improved but you did a good job. Now all we need is a singer and some music

Reviewed by Tami Ryan

Reviewed on February 17, 2007

This is a very nice piece, with a strong finish. Nice work, Paul.

Tami

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on February 16, 2007

I think this is a fine first attempt, Paul. It flows very nicely. Thank you for sharing this song. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 16, 2007

Fantastic lyrics Paul. The rhyme and rhythm of this poem is perfect for a ballad. I hope you have it put to music. I'd love to hear it!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on February 16, 2007

Paul this really touched my heart it's beautiful and I like it just like it is.

Reviewed by H. Lena Jones

Reviewed on February 15, 2007

Nice lyrics,Paul. I like it. Were you thinking Country and Western?
Great first attempt...

Lena

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on February 15, 2007

Powerful thoughts and a great job for the first try in this...enjoyed, add that music and you are ready to roll!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy

Reviewed on February 15, 2007

Good job for a first timer in the genre. Pick the right melody and let the music guide any further work on it.

Bobbi

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on February 15, 2007

Powerful thoughts lyrically expressed. With a strong melody, this would be on everyone's lips and easily assimilated into the heart and mind's memory banks... In other words, a big hit! TY K xx

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 15, 2007

This is excellent Paul!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on February 15, 2007

The fear inside is gone
Tomorrow's sun anew

Kinda say's it all..Good work Paul..

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on February 15, 2007

wonderful....very very musical......BHUWAN!!!!

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on February 15, 2007

Oh yea,shake shake shake

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten

Reviewed on February 15, 2007

I can hear the music! The speakers' loud and clear!
Fantastic write, Paul~
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on February 15, 2007

I have to agree with the rest, sounds good, but turn up the speakers. Love Holly

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on February 15, 2007

Paul,
This is music. You've done good! My only suggestion would be, "Turn up the speakers!" lol

Great work!

Lisa

Reviewed by K. Mulroney

Reviewed on February 15, 2007

I agree with the first reviewer. Put this to music and it could be a real nice piece!

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper

Reviewed on February 15, 2007

Put to music, it would be a winner. There is some underlying mystery in the words that sparks dozens of posibilities in my head.