This poem was a project to use the word Savvy. I kinda threw in a few of my outlooks on life. Hope you enjoy. I'm not really qualified to give advice,but yet; Who Is? (lol)
Precision with savvy remain but a high,
bountiful blessings bestowed with a sigh.
Treasures and wealth are not given away,
they are earned with knowledge I give here today.
Men in life, who have answered the call,
understand what it means to have nothing at all.
Shrewdly and wisely they follow a plan,
never lost in dreams of making a stand.
These goals that I lay before you at last,
will give an answer but follow my task.
Remember to treat everyone with respect,
all that's accomplished must not show neglect.
When heeding directions that I'm giving you,
don't leave nothing hanging, follow it through.
My advice must be taken quite seriously,
savvy breeds contempt most definitely.
Oh I agree, with bells on. Fantastic advice, and fantastic write.
Ch'erie
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on July 4, 2003
You know I have a thing for great rhyme....and you Sir do it so very well...this poem is.. as always... simply perfect ...ty, Dani
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
Reviewed on July 4, 2003
Take a bow, THIS is advice I should listen to, ..... I always give better advice than what I take... THEN it comes down to that old saying "Practice what you preach"...an endless circle of advice :) Very well penned. Liked the thought process.
Emilie
Reviewed by serenety L (Reader)
Reviewed on July 2, 2003
Bravo. Well said. We will follow your advise.
Nico
Precision with savvy remain but a high,
bountiful blessings bestowed with a sigh.
Treasures and wealth are not given away,
they are earned with knowledge I give here today.
Men in life, who have answered the call,
understand what it means to have nothing at all.
Shrewdly and wisely they follow a plan,
never lost in dreams of making a stand.
I would take your advice anyday.. This is superb!!!
A scientist/philosopher explores the mysteries of existence in a highly personal quest for answers to life's ultimate questions, forging a bridge between sterile science and spiritual values -- a scholarly work for all who seek wisdom, truth, true fr
Explains the realizations that have given the author the views of living life fully. The life each person dreams about.
You must take a look at yourself before dreams can be reached.
Deciding what is the core of belief.
This combined narrative dialogue and play is about the uncreated, unborn and undying transcendent Self of God-consciousness and Buddha-nature. It describes an odyssey of transcendent Consciousness Awakening and Remembrance.
Ch'erie
Take a bow, THIS is advice I should listen to, ..... I always give better advice than what I take... THEN it comes down to that old saying "Practice what you preach"...an endless circle of advice :) Very well penned. Liked the thought process.
Emilie
Nico
Peace,
Cherokee
Reindeer
bountiful blessings bestowed with a sigh.
Treasures and wealth are not given away,
they are earned with knowledge I give here today.
Men in life, who have answered the call,
understand what it means to have nothing at all.
Shrewdly and wisely they follow a plan,
never lost in dreams of making a stand.
I would take your advice anyday.. This is superb!!!
Love
Tinka
tn
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)