Very well done, the trick with knowledge is to know when you had enough... or do we all still rush to learn... very enjoyable read, i enjoyed this a hell of a lot, nice one...take care Paul...Mark...
Paul.. I knew you could of course.. but here look at your first two lines; the paradox is genius.. I think you can better the last two lines to cope with the excellence of the first two.. If you do, this is going to be the second classic after The Purple Cow!
Perfect little 4-liner here.. When meter and rhyme are 'just so' it tickles my mind.. you have a great one here, Paul. Please tell me who/how to find this person and the challenge.. thanks.. katy.
This collection of poetry addresses the nature of time, reflections on the natural world, the difficulty of loss,
contemporary social issues and gratitude for life.
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