If They Could See Me Now (poem) by Paul Berube on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 17, 2008

Paul,
This is an excellent piece! I especially like the line "Emotional wears, riding these seams." Such unique wording in each line, though! Each person is so very complex. Sometimes we have difficulty understanding ourselves. This is creative reasoning for why a book should not be judged by its cover. Love and Hugs~
Sheila

Reviewed by Ashraf Goreja (Reader)

Reviewed on October 21, 2003

A profound and beautiful poem.

Greetings from Atlanta.

Goreja.com

Reviewed by Rodd Jokre (Reader)

Reviewed on October 20, 2003

Inspiring and excellent... Thanks...

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on October 20, 2003

I love it Paul, you are so masterful with rhyme and flow. I've missed your work.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 20, 2003

So glad to see you Paul! Miss your great writes of wisdom and such wonderful rhythm and rhyme...you are special in that category.Superb!

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on October 20, 2003

You write about something that many feel but can't express as well as you do here. This is so profound, straight to the core, and the way the last verse envelopes the whole piece. Very strong writing...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on October 20, 2003

Very profound, Paul. This is fine poetry. It's so good to have you back.
~Chrissie

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on October 20, 2003

Oh Paul...I just adore the last two lines...great work...great meter in this one too...floria

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 20, 2003

Deep thought provoking write Paul!!

Gee glad to see you are back!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on October 20, 2003

Profound and excellent!

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang

Reviewed on October 20, 2003

An inspiring poem. Nice to have you back!

Reviewed by Tami Ryan

Reviewed on October 20, 2003

Paul,

Sure did miss you 'round here! I especially liked this:
"Reality covered by each chosen pleat,
Cores of existence hidden beneath."

Glad to see you back with this gem.
Tami

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on October 20, 2003

Excellent!
Love that last stanza...

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 20, 2003

Very deep thought provoking write! Nice to see you back :-)

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on October 20, 2003

Paul, You have been missed! Glad to see you are back with a flair! Great write. Lisa

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on October 20, 2003

Finally something from you! Glad to see you back with style.

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on October 20, 2003

Great to see you Paul...Your rhyme is excellent (as always)....and your depth divine. Ty, Dani

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on October 20, 2003

{{{{Paul}}}}
WOW, long time no see and what a truly fabulous treat you have here for me to read!!!! This splendid piece contains and twines so much saddened musing thought, so many sad musing emotions yet inspires all the way throughout...Brilliant expressive inspiring writing!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~