Dera erin -I liked this poem (was easier to reasd in my tired condition-just had my teeth out-some of the roots were not shallow).. for its' simplicity and depth and expression as a whole(layout,words, and message). Like the fourier wave analysis of the universe-life has its good seasons, bad seasons, and all kinds of cycles and oscillations within. Some can nagg for ever, some are the extentions of the same of others, damnedand damned to know of the other pieces of their existances, what lay in between wave to the next, parted by space , and evolution and the winds of nature, and by our own personal natures. and habits. When we at once lose the total say once gained/conquered for continuance as a species-then are "sitting" pawns and not kings..until then the cyclic monotony of the pulsating fever and pain at the nerve ends where my teeth were in my dimly lit skid row room-until I return to my normal routine siesta..and sleeping, sleep, and eating, eat, and going out to get change to eat and sleep.....
MARVIN

"Sit" makes one stand up for life and think of betterment of living.
An inspiring poetical stream that flows to the sea of reason on waves of knowledge where thought glows.

I Salute You, Sublime Poet!

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Fantastic! Love the imaginative way you crafted this!
reminds me of e e cummings;-)!

Erin how creative is this?...Wow...wish
I would have thought of it..good job..
floria

Wonderful write. Enjoyed.

very creative piece