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Quiet…They’ll Hear You! or: Another Slanted Summer

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Friday, May 28, 2004

Shhh…quiet!
They’ll hear you!
And find me…
Find me hiding
on the side of the house,
already.
Another summer’s started
for a slanted mother.
Pathetic? Oh, yeah.
I know that because
I know myself. Oh, look!
A huge blue swallowtail
is flapping and gliding
around my backyard! … Sorry.
I become distracted
with my passion, observation.
From the outside. Tragic?
Yes, and no. I give in full
when I give. Giving is hard
for me, with no good reason,
it just is. It is not innate
in human beings, but
it is lauded. So, I hide
from eyes that could condemn
me. Another summer looms
for a slanted mother.
Who’s light is bending…

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 5/26/04


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Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on May 29, 2004
Brilliant! But if the "I" is you, you give
more than you think. My feeling is, it is
as natural to you as breathing. Thanks, Erin!
'Pea' <3

Reviewed by KJ McPhee
Reviewed on May 29, 2004
it's like an old woman's meditation, like a captive bird.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 28, 2004
Touching write Erin!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on May 28, 2004
its got a kind of uncanny ambience to it i almost felt the bird should fluttering around with a broken wing, but its a bit on your down side i thought, not so elevated as you can, imo i dont reckon we should bother with the other, whats the point of informing us how cynical we can get over life´s a tragedy as consciousness, we all know we fall, anyway well written but that´s the problem isn´t it. saludos robin

Reviewed on May 28, 2004
This struck me as quietly sad for some reason, maybe its just my mood, but I felt this very deeply tonight,

Reindeer

Reviewed on May 28, 2004
Erin:

For some reasons, it one hits me as a joke. Is it? Sorry if I'm mistaken.

~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on May 28, 2004
"who's light is bending..." Perfect description of an aging person, I am definitely in tune with one, if I am not just go along with it, as I am getting higher by the second and it is not easy to hear I am wrong...take care young lady...Peace, Ed & Rufuz


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