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Time Unbecomes Her

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Tuesday, May 17, 2005

It feels like the old days,
The picnic-table-sitting highway to hell,
The alone days of unstructured ways,
The brutal days of self-sacrifice.

‘Time is naught but a beacon
Of enslavement.’

It feels like a sick play,
This sorrow-of-self highway to hell,
The lonely days of unmanageable grays,
The savage days of self-aberration.

‘Time is caught by her beacon
Of enslavement.’

It feels like eternity’s maze,
That shifting-while-you-were-missing highway to hell,
The solo days of unmitigated haze,
The piquant days of self-absorption.

Only, worse.

‘Time is fraught by sad beacons
Of enslavement.’

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 5/17/05
    


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Reviewed by Joyce James (Reader)
Reviewed on May 30, 2005
The title caught my eye. There is such sadness here. Life is a highway to hell? Suffering and loneliness peer up at th reader with ad eyes. I like your style - the way you use rhyme and repetition in separate stanzas. This flows well and does not appear contrived.
Clear thinking. Well done.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on May 18, 2005
"...The solo days of unmitigated haze,
the piquant days of self-absorption..."

Good lines...I like your repetition.

Elizabeth

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on May 17, 2005
Sadly poignant...E & R

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on May 17, 2005
A sad write but I understand.


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