When Self Meets Self
by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Wednesday, May 18, 2005
When the eyes of self
start peering
from the scenery
of beauty,
there is a need
to reconform,
especially when
the mind is bleary.
When the aches of self
start paining
in the greenery
of beauty,
there is a need
to reconfirm,
especially when
the soul is weary.
When the nays of self
start paring
from the plenary
of beauty,
there is a need
to recommit,
especially when
the mind is theory.
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 5/18/05
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I enjoyed the rhyme scheme - it worked well and was not contrived.
This is my type of poetry. Essentially abstract but tied in firmly to the real world. Well done. Joyce James
YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A powerful, affirming write--well done!!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
Love Tinka