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My Arteries

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Saturday, November 5, 2005

I can’t believe
The veins I see,
Well, not really veins,
Arteries.

What once not chic,
With fingers stumped,
But not so bad
As fingers come.

What once was chic,
Those fingers young,
Were not as bad
As what has come.

I can’t believe
The blue I see
When I’ve been typing
Arteries.

I hold my hands
Up in the air,
I slap the skin,
Deflate their care.

But when I dip
My hands to type,
Those arteries
Come into sight.

What once was chic,
With fingers small,
What once was me,
I’ll tell it all.

What once not chic,
I am it all,
These hands of mine,
Beyond recall…

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 11/6/05


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Reviewed by Sandi Schraut
Reviewed on November 6, 2005
Terrific use of words to make a portrait for the mind! Sandi

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on November 6, 2005
Hands are like our eyes We need to take care.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 6, 2005
hands reflect the essence of who we are ... the important thing is to use them well ...

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on November 5, 2005
Ah, Erin. You capture those senior moments I'm having with lazer-like precision. The brown spots and the blue veins ... and the arteries.
Best regards,
Leland

Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine
Reviewed on November 5, 2005
Jackie O. must have felt the same way -- when she had a very famous portrait done of herself -- she made the artist use someone else's hands with her own body. Good poem expressing this thought. R

Reviewed by Alain Gracio
Reviewed on November 5, 2005
Beautiful introspective poem
Cheers
Alain

Reviewed on November 5, 2005

Wit-wise composition. "My Arteries" flows beautifully from the eyes of a heedful observer.

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Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on November 5, 2005
Erin,

Excellent rhyme and write; those arteries encased in your talented hands are all. :) Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 5, 2005
Oh my hands are 50 years older than me...I swear!!

The shocker came after a picture was taken of me with my one hand on my chest...the veins was soo blue and the skin like it was almost "see-through" in color...and I realized my hands are UGLY!!

Love Tinka


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