My Arteries
by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Saturday, November 5, 2005
I can’t believe
The veins I see,
Well, not really veins,
Arteries.
What once not chic,
With fingers stumped,
But not so bad
As fingers come.
What once was chic,
Those fingers young,
Were not as bad
As what has come.
I can’t believe
The blue I see
When I’ve been typing
Arteries.
I hold my hands
Up in the air,
I slap the skin,
Deflate their care.
But when I dip
My hands to type,
Those arteries
Come into sight.
What once was chic,
With fingers small,
What once was me,
I’ll tell it all.
What once not chic,
I am it all,
These hands of mine,
Beyond recall…
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 11/6/05
Best regards,
Leland
Cheers
Alain
Wit-wise composition. "My Arteries" flows beautifully from the eyes of a heedful observer.
Visiting Your Den is always a learning experience.
Thank You for enriching The American Fine Letters.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Excellent rhyme and write; those arteries encased in your talented hands are all. :) Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
The shocker came after a picture was taken of me with my one hand on my chest...the veins was soo blue and the skin like it was almost "see-through" in color...and I realized my hands are UGLY!!
Love Tinka