Words Of Love
by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Monday, June 26, 2006
I find words of love
Bewildering, assaying and
Almost hostile,
To all else going on…
I find worth of love
Bewildering, parlaying sands
Of time rebegun,
Without experience.
I find worth of love
Bewildering, prescribing hands
Of passion, detailed
By wisdom ashen.
I find words of love
Redundant, denying lands
Almost happy,
By all else going on…
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 6/26/06
A sense of intellectual hopelessness permeates this construct.
I would imagine that for the writer, if this is an open heart confession of real life experience, that there is much that clouds her days with discontent.
If this is just an intellectualization, I would suggest reading the Song of Solomon to reinvigorate hope.
Richard
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