October Moon II
by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Thursday, October 5, 2006
October Moon! Your beauty delights, fogged
By clouds thinned-sacrifice, layer intrigued!
Each moment passing brings new phases, re-
Beat my heart of blue, I’m tired of fatigue…
Moon? You’ve played tricks with my eyes, introduced
Chaos’ effect, calmed and roiled and pled
Innocence, of fools. No, not fools, rules. Come,
Moon of reasoning, you are early-bled.
Never-mind, full moon, there are months to come,
Silly planet has curves no one has seen, but,
You. Your beams, sublimed by cloud-light, consume
Mortal flesh. Ah, let me guess, you will cut
The fullness of your light, slowly. How now
Do I live you, again? Violin-boughed?
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 10/5/06
I kept percieving while I was reading that the accident you had some months back is still weighing more than you would like it too on your emotional out-put.
I could be daft, but I felt that thought the entire time I read.
A great write ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Great way to write..
You pen the moods of the mood and how she affects us brilliantly; I love the rhyming and meter of this sonnet; well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Love Tinka