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Crystal

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Tuesday, November 13, 2007

Learning life-lessons never stops...

I moved the flawed crystal into the sun streaming through the window, to dust. And felt tears sting my eyes. I thought back to when I met Emraude.

It was on a Solitaire gaming site. There were a few excellent players who constantly posted the highest scores. On the message board, Emraude was always helpful and sweet natured.

I had made a big splash myself, posting little stories and happily joking with everyone, many more people posted, and I was learning to play the games better. Emraude was too good to beat. I began to feel jealous.

Emraude had a web site, and I went to check her out. She was gorgeous! And her family was rich! She didn’t have to worry about buying credits with a credit card.

In a fit of pique, I posted some hurtful things, being senselessly mean, and we fought. For more than a week, Emraude didn’t post or play.

One night, there was a message from her sister saying Emraude was terribly sick, again, but wanted to say hello to her friends, and let them know she was fighting her stomach cancer. She sent a warm 'hi' to Geminthemoon.

That’s me.

Her real name is Crystal.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 5/1/04
     


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Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on November 14, 2007
This is such a sad, but sincere reminder that jealousy is truly a horrible evil. The lessons we all learn in life are a constant reminder of our human fraility. I hope all is well, and that Crystal is much better.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed on November 14, 2007
Erin,

We all get jealous, we all say hurtful things, with no real intention of injuring another: in our snit, we don't really care at the time, just wanting to vent. When we find out the "rest of the story," we are ashamed, and learn another lesson. Powerfully penned regret, well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by R Beeman
Reviewed on November 13, 2007
a real heart warming from the soul write that bares the threads of your very nature. well written with compassion even though some thoughts were not. human nature plays both sides of life's fence and it is hard to sit in the middle. be blessed for this work blessed me.

always,
randy

Reviewed by Tracy Evans
Reviewed on November 13, 2007
I have to agree with Karen. Wow! You were very honest and I can only imagine the pain you felt. I hope it all worked out for you.

Tracy B. Evans - Author of Fatal Kidnapping

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on November 13, 2007
wow-impressive and honest


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