Being Here I am
Fugly in the land
Hurts. of thought.
Variations of a three-something…
One + a
Zero-held-space
Equals two.
_ I guess successful people
Can focus they’re attention
Mine can’t stop moving
From one thing to another.
One plus just zero
Equals me.
~Do we what-happens-then
When we’re leached out?
One + Ot (a-one-space)
= three.
^ Being ever-you
Within reach
Hurts. Where am I?
zEROd. By
One.
*Here I am
In the land of thought.
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
© Copyright 3/9/09
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very creative writing,
Peace be with you
William
Loved this
Bobbi
Can focus they’re attention
Mine can’t stop moving
From one thing to (another)
You're so good at this Erin. Obviously I'm not. -gene.
It's always a temptation for us readers to put 'fragments' together as if we were trying to fix Humpty Dumpty or a fallen smashed vase but here they are so meaningful by themselves and as part of the whole at the same time, they are streams and bits of consciousness, but too of feeling and evaluation. I love what you do with this both in terms of language and symbol. For me this was a unique read and I cherish it. Excellent!
John
How original and unusual! Telling of your sorrows by mathematical equations. And the way it's written tells of your broken feelings about yourself.
Mary
Self loathing is what comes up, no matter how I add it up. Anger. Sadness. Know I suck at math, but are you okay? "zEROd. By One." God?!? Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.