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Eye Talking

by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen — Read all 1,670 poems by Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Sunday, January 26, 2003

(Body language,
eye contact,
facial ballet...
of meanings.)

The neighbor comes over,
to the back door,
my daughter's doing dishes...
she needs something
I happen to have,
*eye contact* her
expression is familiar to me,
I give a slight lift
of my eyebrows, and
a smug smirk, a
puppy dog face
comes over her,
I draw closer,
we chitchat about nothing,
crinkleing our eyes, I
glance at my daughter's back,
her eyes flick there also,
and back up to mine, as she gives
a small lopsided smile,
hands in pockets, slightly
leaning backwards,
*body language* I
smile at her wickedly,
because I can,
glancing again at a
back that has grown ears,
as she lifts her eyebrows,
widens her eyes,
and turns up
the corners of her mouth
slightly...
*facial ballet* I
laugh out loud, enjoying myself!
As I open the screen door
and start outside to talk,
a twinkle appears in her eye,
she whispers loudly, "I
need to borrow a .^.*&.",
my eyes widen in stunned amazement
at her brashness, and sharpen,
as I glance into the house...
tactful daughter hasn't
shown any interest, but
by her stance, I see she's
grinning. With an accusatory
glare, but smiling eyes, at
neighbors feigned sheepish look,
I tell her
I'll meet her at her house
in 10 minutes...

Erin Moen
1/25/03
Copyright 2003 ©



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Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)
Reviewed on February 10, 2003
The eyes windows of the soul great point and great write !

Reviewed by Micha Julian
Reviewed on January 28, 2003
you make, oh, this is, i could visualize this...that's how good this is...love this, how well mother knows daughter, the irony of the 'eye-contact' and oh...yes, this is, as usual, so extraordinary...yes, the 'eye-contact', is so...like an esp between mother and daughter, oh...and how true with people, Erin...and you just ...well, the ending, oh...no..didn't see it coming at all...but all the various ways of communicating, so vivid, here...yes++++
((((YOU))))

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on January 27, 2003
Everything is in the eyes...good write. floria

Reviewed by Chester Hardy lll
Reviewed on January 26, 2003
Our eyes tell all, wonderful write Erin.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 26, 2003
very creative...

Reviewed by Nancy D.
Reviewed on January 26, 2003
The eyes have it, great write Erin.
Nancy

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on January 26, 2003
Oh, My...okay, so I edited and screwed the format up on this piece, just had to check it out after reading TRASK's string...Hhahaha, no worries, tomorrow is, another day! Again, patience and smiles, we are always learning, whether we want to or not!! :D

Reviewed by Brittany Renée
Reviewed on January 26, 2003
Your creativity and imaginiation sparks and flies throughout the words about you and your daughter!

Warm Love,
*-Brittany-*

Reviewed by Oisín Breen (Reader)
Reviewed on January 26, 2003
nice idea. Very visual

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 26, 2003
Excellent creative write...

Reviewed by Theresa Koch
Reviewed on January 26, 2003
Awesome imagery~

Reviewed by michael
Reviewed on January 26, 2003
Well done.. A nice visual walk super twist and ending.. Bravo!!! michael


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